silent

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Written, May 21, 2024

Poetry/haiku/silent
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1645-995-21
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written for the Contest, No. 1311, Sponsor B. Strand, Judged 05/23/2024

Sixth Place

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over mossy rocks plunges cascading water- a bird drifts silent

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/21/2024 4:25:00 PM

the physical structure of your poem adds meaning to your Haiku, and a perfect one at that! I like these short form poems, and yours is a delight. Have a great evening, Constance, hugs, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2024 1:37:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Benjamin Bartley

Date: 5/21/2024 1:50:00 PM

Now that's some nice haiku. I can learn a lot from you. Off to read more . . . . .

Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2024 1:38:00 PM

Benjamin, thank you for the compliment and comment, blessings