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For the 'Triolet Contrast' Poetry Contest of Hilo Poet

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In nature’s hush, stillness is found, far from cacophony of noise and hate-hurled words in which we’re drowned. In nature’s hush, stillness is found; quietude exudes all around. Racket annoys like raucous boys. In nature’s hush, stillness is found, far from cacophony of noise.

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Date: 1/21/2025 5:52:00 PM
Let's get away to nature where peace and quietness is the norm. Well said and written Andrea. Hugs.
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Date: 1/21/2025 11:47:00 AM
The "hush" of nature is a precious treasure where creativity, perspective and healing are birthed. Lovely triolet embracing serenity! Best wishes for the contest. Sending you the blessings of a still, winter morning after a snowfall!
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Date: 1/21/2025 10:45:00 AM
A nice nature poem with serenity in mind.
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Date: 1/21/2025 6:55:00 AM
I can’t agree more with the sentiment of your triolet Andrea. I’ve got to the point whereby I rarely listen to the noise of news these days and the vitriol spouted on social media. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/20/2025 8:09:00 PM
I often went to the nearby hill where I enjoyed stillness of nature even going deeper.Like the poem.
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Date: 1/20/2025 8:03:00 PM
A lovely nature poem.Very nice
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Date: 1/20/2025 4:32:00 PM
I liked this - it flowed very well <3
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Date: 1/20/2025 2:20:00 PM
Imressive, I like it. Pangie xx
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Date: 1/20/2025 12:44:00 PM
If a person can find a place where nature remains untouched, the quietude is wonderful. It is refreshing to visit these places. Lovely work if for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 1/20/2025 9:50:00 AM
In the silence, all is still...now I know the meaning of a word-drop...and the ripple voice of eternal sea. Love it! Great write.
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Date: 1/20/2025 9:42:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I do prefer nature's hush than the noise of the city, good luck in the contest. xx
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Date: 1/20/2025 7:59:00 AM
Lovely! In nature, we feel completely surrounded by God’s grace!
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