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The eastern whip-poor-will is a medium-sized nightjar from North America. The whip-poor-will is commonly heard within its range, but less often seen because of its camouflage. It is named onomatopoeically after its song. Image result for pictures of whippoorwill

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eerie silence then
whip-poor-will calls with gusto....
 crack of a cool dawn

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2021 1:54:00 PM

i can just imagine this

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2021 3:17:00 PM

Jack, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/30/2021 12:28:00 AM

Lovely Haiku with beautiful imagery in just three lines Sara...It must have been a pleasant dawn indeed... Love and hugs... ~ Ani

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2021 5:33:00 AM

Anitha, I once could hear them inside my bedroom but now we have double paned windows and lots of insulation and all the windows and doors closed. It was much nicer falling asleep to the sound of whip-poor-wills and being awaken by them than an alaram clock. Yes, it was a pleasant dawn when I have a few minutes to myself before everyone arises. Sara

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/29/2021 3:29:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this, making me praise the Lord for His creation ... also praising HIM. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2021 4:13:00 PM

Beata, I was hoping someone/ones would see it that way. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/28/2021 11:21:00 AM

Makes me think of the quiet of early morn, and I can hear the bird call and feel the cool air ~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2021 4:10:00 PM

Michelle, Yes, it is about that time of day when I have a few minutes to myself before everyone arises. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/27/2021 6:04:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Sara! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2021 4:08:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. Sara

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/26/2021 8:16:00 AM

Wow!!! Beautiful!!! Fantastic imagery, Sara...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2021 12:20:00 PM

Supraja, Thank you very much for stopping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/26/2021 7:06:00 AM

Each line is an image--beautifully painted Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2021 12:17:00 PM

Vijay, Ahh!! Thank you for the kind review. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 5/25/2021 6:27:00 PM

I used to love listening to the call of the bob white or the whip-poor-will in the early evening when I was a child. Nice. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/26/2021 4:47:00 AM

Judy, We don't have the quail here much anymore. I think the area's habitat has changed. There was a pair here for a couple of years then we did not see them again. We also have had an increase in the number of bobcats and they might be eating the eggs or the baby birds before they mature. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 5/25/2021 5:33:00 PM

Very well crafted and meaningful haiku, Sara. I enjoyed reading it. Have a terrific day!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/26/2021 4:48:00 AM

Irfanulla, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/24/2021 1:16:00 PM

Hi Sara, What a well written haiku, I echo what Carolyn said. I enjoyed the read.Have a wonderful day;-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2021 2:48:00 AM

Alexis, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2021 12:11:00 PM

You taught me something about this lovely bird, Sara. It would be wonderful to hear their distinctive calls each morning. A lovely haiku! Hugs, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/25/2021 2:45:00 AM

Carolyn, Their call is reassuring since we have been hearing them for 56 years. I have no idea where they are in the woods but they are close enough that we hear them in their nesting season. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/24/2021 6:26:00 AM

That lovely time of day then the sound of the birds to start the day. Lovely image Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2021 6:46:00 AM

Tom, Your comment is uplifting. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/24/2021 5:26:00 AM

Though not often seen, they say it has a lovely birdsong. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2021 6:42:00 AM

Victor, I get to hear them every night and have been hearing them now for 56 years. it is part of our nightly serenade. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/24/2021 4:08:00 AM

I like the well-crafted Haiku; it's beautiful how three short lines can carry so much significance, particularly with regards to imagery and symbolism. Have a wonderful day, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/24/2021 4:44:00 AM

Lasaad, Thanks for the nice review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here reading and taking time to comment. Sara

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