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Silence That I Keep

This silence that I keep leaves room for the unheard, so I take one last breath and I gather up my words. This s u f f e r i n g took its time I have been forgotten, abandoned by the fear of the decayed and rotten. My articulation for forgiveness has been murmured. Like a r o s e withering in the night down to its roots, its nourishing nectar contaminates and pollutes. I collect all of its debris and seek atonement, lost inside the sanctity of this abstract moment yet, gathering my words invalidates and refutes. I take the p l u n g e and deny what I say and do feeling emotions that contradict all I ever knew. My speech just brings nothing but complication as my quarrel and debates bring only altercation. My s o u l is but a medallion thief that turned into blue. This silence that I keep fears all I ever said before, now I have no time to explore what I should restore. My voice has been nothing but a hush in the breeze gathering up all my words praying this pain will cease. One hundred wars have come... arriving ten thousand more. Rhyme scheme: A-A-B-B-A Chosen theme: "I Gather Up My Words" Let Your Pen Drip Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings Date: May 19, 2018

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Date: 6/5/2018 9:04:00 PM
Beautifully penned, Laura. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/7/2018 8:06:00 AM
thank you dear Line :)-luloo
Date: 5/24/2018 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura, this is so sad and moving-
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Lu Loo
Date: 6/7/2018 8:06:00 AM
thank you Michelle :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2018 10:29:00 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:42:00 AM
many thanks sweet Broken Wings, ,I adore you as always :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2018 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Laura :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:42:00 AM
thank you sweet Heidi :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2018 5:24:00 AM
Wonderfully written my friend congratulations!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:42:00 AM
many thanks Brian :)-luloo
Date: 5/23/2018 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your first position win, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:42:00 AM
thank you again sweet SUbimal :)-luloo
Date: 5/22/2018 10:45:00 PM
Very emotive write and well executed, Laura Loo! Congrats on your win :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:41:00 AM
many thanks lovely Laura :)-luloo
Date: 5/22/2018 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. I love your first line... profound. I know this state of confusion. Well done!
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:41:00 AM
thank you dear lady ;)-luloo
Date: 5/19/2018 11:32:00 AM
Do I discern a bit of futility? Lovely, lovely writing as usual.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/24/2018 6:41:00 AM
thank you sweet Subimal ;)-luloo

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