Silence That I Keep

This silence that I keep leaves room for the unheard,
             so I take one last breath and I gather up my words. 
  This  s u f f e r i n g  took its time I have been forgotten,
abandoned by the fear of the decayed and rotten.
              My articulation for forgiveness has been murmured.

        Like a  r o s e  withering in the night down to its roots, 
its nourishing nectar contaminates and pollutes. 
   I collect all of its debris and seek atonement, 
              lost inside the sanctity of this abstract moment
  yet, gathering my words invalidates and refutes. 

     I take the  p l u n g e  and deny what I say and do
feeling emotions that contradict all I ever knew.   
        My speech just brings nothing but complication
as my quarrel and debates bring only altercation. 
   My  s o u l  is but a medallion thief that turned into blue.

       This silence that I keep fears all I ever said before, 
now I have no time to explore what I should restore. 
         My voice has been nothing but a hush in the breeze
gathering up all my words praying this pain will cease. 
    One hundred wars have come...
                            arriving ten thousand more.



Rhyme scheme: A-A-B-B-A
Chosen theme: "I Gather Up My Words"

Let Your Pen Drip Contest
Sponsor, Broken Wings
Date: May 19, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Beautifully penned, Laura. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:06 AM
thank you dear Line :)-luloo
Faulkner Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations, Laura, this is so sad and moving-
Scars Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 8:06 AM
thank you Michelle :)-luloo
La France Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:42 AM
many thanks sweet Broken Wings, ,I adore you as always :)-luloo
Sands Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations for your win Laura :)
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:42 AM
thank you sweet Heidi :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 5:24 AM
Wonderfully written my friend congratulations!
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:42 AM
many thanks Brian :)-luloo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:25 AM
Congratulations on your first position win, Laura.
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:42 AM
thank you again sweet SUbimal :)-luloo
Leiser Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:45 PM
Very emotive write and well executed, Laura Loo! Congrats on your win :)
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:41 AM
many thanks lovely Laura :)-luloo
Gentry Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. I love your first line... profound. I know this state of confusion. Well done!
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:41 AM
thank you dear lady ;)-luloo
Wanter Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Do I discern a bit of futility? Lovely, lovely writing as usual.
Scars Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 6:41 AM
thank you sweet Subimal ;)-luloo
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