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Mandolin melodies harmonised horizons, yet the only strings being strummed were those of my heart. In the midst of enchanting melodies, where nothing else mattered, but her, we wandered barefoot, hand in hand, as the tenderness of our steps decorated the sand. In the simplicity of pure beauty, lost in a moment of perfection. We lay admiring the heavens, watching daylight drift away. The jealous golden orb silently sank, as colourful skies summoned illuminated expressions to light up a black and white world. In darkness we lay and gazed lost in the silent serenity of the stars, until the tranquillity of her sequin eyes hypnotised my soul and I danced devoted to the magnificence of her delicate elegance. The whisper of sweet sentiments revealed our secret serenade. In the distance an orchestra of humming birds hummed the chorus of our passionate song. Her arms like celestial wings, embraced me close. Her surreal kiss guided my lips home. As waves washed away our footsteps, the moon closed its eyes, as millions of shy stars hid behind a blanket of nocturnal clouds. Silent One Simple Musings 10 December 2017

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Date: 12/26/2017 7:52:00 AM
Lovely ...write
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Silent One
Date: 3/6/2018 4:01:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/12/2017 2:31:00 PM
Great imagery my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:33:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/12/2017 11:41:00 AM
A starry nights tale full of lovely wonderment. I loved the fourth stanza and the feeling I poetically felt when read was one that took my mind into a better place. I am in love with the way you used personification in places where describing the object brings it to life. A beautiful romantic write!
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Kristina..
Date: 12/12/2017 9:38:00 AM
A romantic masterpiece by the Romance maestro ... passion supreme poetry, SO! Great lines throughout ... we wandered barefoot, hand in hand, as the tenderness of our steps decorated the sand. Beautiful poetic expressions fluted by your lyrical pen. Such a bejeweled prose offering. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/12/2017 9:40:00 AM
Btw ... that's a beautiful song coupled w/your fine poem. You sure have goood musical taste. Will download this song for sure. Love and friendship hugs always.
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 9:39:00 AM
I was told it was not that romantic, so getting such feedback from the romantic warrior means so much.. thank you..
Date: 12/12/2017 9:37:00 AM
It's amazing how love can make time stand still with such a sweet, serene focus I have enjoyed this experience that your words beautifully bring back to mind, Silent One!!
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thank you Mike.. It would be a dream come true for so many...
Date: 12/12/2017 8:55:00 AM
You romantic old dog you! A very sensitive write... kudos to you good buddy! Greetings, Benny Hill!
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Benny...
Date: 12/12/2017 7:03:00 AM
oh my, how passionate and romantic is this! You detailed everything sensual and I hope this is non-fiction for you. May you be filled with love always...luloooo
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Lulooo
Date: 12/12/2017 5:57:00 AM
Fantastic presentation. A pleasure to read, and experience.
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Scott
Date: 12/12/2017 4:00:00 AM
Cont/.... So I'm just left to admire this mesmeric eloquent poem. And as a bird lover, my strings were pulled by the creative mention of humming birds. I have unposted poems where I refer to birdsong orchestra so I like how u too find it so. Kudos fav poet.
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:37:00 PM
I am sure you can much better than this... Thank you for your kind comment
Date: 12/12/2017 3:59:00 AM
The title drew me in too, so charmingly poetic. By the way I could never write like this unless it really happened to me, that is I can never write such awesome romantic things out of the imagination. So wonder if u could tell us if Al this really happened as u describe so poetically and marvellously or u wud be the silent one imagining things. I don't know but sleeping under the stars in this modern so called progressed world is no longer possible.
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Date: 12/11/2017 5:48:00 PM
That is pure beauty. You are a magician with your words my friend.
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:38:00 PM
Abracadabra! Thank you James
Date: 12/11/2017 4:44:00 PM
...we wandered barefoot, hand in hand, as the tenderness of our steps decorated the sand & the last two lines are my favorite. Altogether lovely and romantic, my friend!
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim..
Date: 12/11/2017 7:38:00 AM
Melodious the music sounds but the ecstasy from your verses comes my friend, Silent One!
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios..
Date: 12/11/2017 7:36:00 AM
Beautiful romantic melodies..Well written Silent One
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Silent One
Date: 12/12/2017 3:26:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 12/10/2017 11:50:00 PM
Nice one
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 5:53:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 12/10/2017 10:59:00 PM
An awesome romantic depiction Silent One; innocently beautiful!~Che :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl..
Date: 12/10/2017 9:43:00 PM
Perfect and very beautiful :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 12/10/2017 8:24:00 PM
Super romantic and beautiful, Silent One.
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 12/10/2017 4:03:00 PM
This is beautiful, Silent One
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:10:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 12/10/2017 3:55:00 PM
Inspirational! You'll see!
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 12/10/2017 11:53:00 AM
Romance at its best SO, congratulations...
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 12/10/2017 11:42:00 AM
It's a beautiful piece, indeed. One can imagine all that went up under those blushing stars.
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:11:00 AM
I will leave that to your imagination Elieen... Thank you..
Date: 12/10/2017 10:07:00 AM
There's a beautiful innocence to your poem...I enjoyed it...All the best SO... And...All the best for the season
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:13:00 AM
Thank you Arturo..
Date: 12/10/2017 10:07:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful! Romantic, enchanting, sexy, and so much love. This could be my bedtime read... Lol! YES I love it! Hugs and smiles :)
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Akkina..
Date: 12/10/2017 8:28:00 AM
It is difficult to find words to describe the brilliance in your writing Silent One! This is another beautiful story of romance where I am swept away in the emotion of your pen. And you have a talent for selecting the perfect musical accompaniment to match the mood of your creation. Yes ... definitely another favorite for me !!!
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Silent One
Date: 12/11/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Judy...
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