Silence of Ischemia Dreams-Hiku 27-

Written: July 23, for Contest by Broan Strand ************** ischemia d r e a m s s quiet g a n r d i e n e s in the v where r o s e s | | \\|// don’t *b l* *o o* *m* ***

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Date: 7/24/2025 3:29:00 PM
Beautiful, Sotto. Congrats
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Date: 7/24/2025 9:28:00 AM
SP, very interesting combination of concepts. A quiet garden in the veins gives us a lot to think about. Hopefully leads to sweet dreams and not anything bad.
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Date: 7/24/2025 4:06:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 7/23/2025 7:49:00 PM
Very deep. Never heard of that condition before - you placed it in just the right places :)
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Date: 7/23/2025 7:10:00 PM
These shaped Haikus are amazing to me. I could never do this. Nice going, my friend. Bill
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Date: 7/23/2025 4:09:00 PM
love this 'scattering' effect used with your Haiku. Outstanding!
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Date: 7/23/2025 1:11:00 PM
What a creative/fun ~ write/shape you have here. Love the fun you have here... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away.........
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Date: 7/23/2025 11:34:00 AM
Great haiku.
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Date: 7/23/2025 11:21:00 AM
Interesting work. I guess maybe for a contest. Way to go. Roses that don't bloom I would think could be called brambles/briers. Sara K
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