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Silence Is Your Perfect Home

I talk and talk all in vain, let me tell you that is a pain. Do you hear me yes or no, I am about ready to blow. I feel you cannot hear me, so I just want to flee. The doctor says you can hear, maybe you need a beer. The doctor says you just don't listen, you need to pay attention. Tuning people out, can make them pout. In your world all alone, is your perfect home. Date: 8-31-2019 Written Third Place  9/5/2019 Silence  “Silence Is Your Perfect Home” By Paula Goldsmith Contest Judged:  9/5/2019  Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 9/16/2019 12:47:00 PM
So true--In your world all alone, is your perfect home...well said, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/16/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. I love to hear what others have to say..........
Date: 9/12/2019 11:01:00 AM
:( sadly powerful. Excellent write. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words & for reading. I did not mean for it to be sad but guess it was......
Date: 9/5/2019 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2019 6:30:00 PM
Thank You, for reading & writing. What a surprise on my placement. I was away & did not know anything about it. Thanks.....
Date: 9/1/2019 6:00:00 PM
- Great written on rhyme - In your world all alone, it becomes a silence - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/20/2019 10:50:00 PM
Thank You, for your kind words and best wishes. I love to hear from other writers. Enjoy your weekend....................
Date: 9/1/2019 3:35:00 PM
Nice write Paula, good rhyme and flow too. Blessings, Gordon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/2/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thank You, for your kind words, reading my work and sending your note. Have a good week.........

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