Get Your Premium Membership

Silence After You

The door clicks shut— a breath held tight in empty halls. Silence folds around me, a heavy shawl, worn thin by grief. Your chair still holds your shape, a ghostly imprint in quiet wood. The air tastes of absence, a language spoken between heartbeats. I search for your voice in shadows, but silence answers— a slow, patient tide pulling me under, carrying memories like driftwood ashore. In this stillness, I hear everything— the weight of your last breath, the echo of laughter turned to dust, unspoken words resting beneath my skin. Here, silence is no emptiness, but the loudest thing I know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/31/2025 3:58:00 PM
I was not expecting the last sentence. Very powerful way to end. This piece has a lot of feeling.
Login to Reply
O'Neil Avatar
Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 6/3/2025 5:17:00 PM
Thank you so much. I’m glad the ending surprised you—it was important to me to leave a lasting impression. I’m happy the emotion came through; that means a great deal.

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry