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To all my dear poets, especially those who've joined in my humble contest, please bear with me. I can't manage judging you poems now, as I have to take care of my little Chacha who's currently in the hospital. She's getting better now. :)

Silence

in a quiet room,
with the hand of li'l baby,
hoping for full recovery,
sunshine meets her glance,
after rainy day has gone.

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Paul Marc

July 9, 2018 at 10:37 PM

Beautiful.

Jan Allison

October 8, 2016 at 3:37 PM

I hope and pray she is fully recovered Aiyah - now I understand why you have been absent from soup - family issues are far more important than anything else your precious child needs you by her bedside:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

April 8, 2016 at 7:07 PM

oh, my is this why you were gone a while? I pray she will be ok. This is very nice. Missed you too!!

Randolph Byrd

April 3, 2016 at 7:57 AM

Short poem but done with the love of a father for a child in jeopardy please read my poem "Samantha"the highest relationship I feel a father and daughter can have friend and equal Hugs Randy

Poet Destroyer A

March 21, 2016 at 8:07 PM

Hi Aiyah, haven't seen you on in a long time. Hope you are fine, friend. Love LINDA

Jim Tidd

February 26, 2016 at 7:58 AM

Too much silence from / the far-off ocean islands; / we need a new poem.

Cynthia Buhain-Baello

February 16, 2016 at 3:41 AM

A very moving poem straight from a mother's heart. I hope she is better now.

Pashang Salehi

February 5, 2016 at 12:03 AM

I HOPE SHE IS BETTER NOW.. THE POEM IS MAGNIFICENT ...

Shaista Aziz

January 24, 2016 at 2:43 AM

Heart touching write..may God bless you and your family with all the happiness...wishes- shaista

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

January 8, 2016 at 4:37 AM

Aiyah, you have not posted lots of poems, i hope you are alright and hope blessings and love stay with you and your family..!~Olive Eloisa =`)

Poet Destroyer A

December 25, 2015 at 10:52 PM

Aiyah, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 21, 2015 at 4:12 AM

- Hello my friend, Aiyah :) - I wish you and your family a beautiful and peaceful Christmas - Best wishes and Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

November 3, 2015 at 11:09 AM

Hi Aiyah! How's your little girl? I clearly remember commenting on this before but I guess I presumed it went through but apparently it did not. I really should be careful next time. This happened to me several times already! Hope you gave good news for us. hugs!

Alexis Y.

October 21, 2015 at 4:49 PM

Aiyah, this is a sad heartfelt write. I pray that sun continues to shine bright in your families life. P.S. Thank you such much for my placement in your falling in love contest, I'm truly honored:-) Alexis

Constance La France

October 20, 2015 at 6:50 PM

Aiyah, this is so sad, I hope your little one is okay now, nothing can be more painful, and I want to thank you so much for my fine placement in your Falling In Love Contest, I am honored and thrilled ~~

Eric Boddie

October 14, 2015 at 1:54 PM

I am glad the rain has passed....and hopefully the sunshine will last....you are truly a Beautiful Soul....please never let your heart turn cold....;)