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Silence

Beneath the waves I sank; darkness surrounded me Silence wrapped its hands around my strangled plea.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2012 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Jonathan. Love, Carol

Joseph May

Date: 8/26/2012 8:09:00 AM

congrats on a great write and a great win Jonathan

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/26/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations Jonathan , I like the take n this xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/25/2012 10:47:00 PM

The silence would be absolute in the sea. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 9:01:00 PM

JONATHON;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/25/2012 5:42:00 PM

Rather scary, I felt claustrophobic reading it and could feel the cold water. I am always afraid of deep water. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/25/2012 5:15:00 PM

A great write indeed, with imagery that tells a story and then some. Congrats on this great win. One love. Joy Wells

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2012 2:18:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..((()))!!!Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 12:51:00 PM

I really like yours, jonathon, as I go thru the winners' list. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/25/2012 12:24:00 PM

Very well done, Jonathan! Powerful! Congrats on your win. Love, Kim