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Silence

Silence can be golden, especially when one sleeps, But in one’s darkest moments, too much silence creeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2013 9:29:00 AM
Congrats ro you on your fine win in the contest. Poetry will always be new. Well done
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Date: 8/29/2012 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Black Eyed Susan's "Silence Please" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Thanks so much for your comments and advice. I will surely effect the corrections. I didn't plan to enter the poem for the contest; just experimenting with the form.
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:01:00 AM
Yeah absolutely. A very entertaining couplet, Andrea. Congrats on the win. Hugsss, Dinda
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Date: 8/26/2012 6:42:00 AM
Love this congratulations Andy lets hope you don't have many dark moments xx
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:52:00 PM
And when one lives alone. My day to day has hardly been quiet. My great granddaughter was married in my yard today. It was a perfect day. But I'm really tired. Congratulationson your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/25/2012 8:58:00 PM
ANDREA;-) congratulations with your awesome entry In Susan's " SILENCE " contest. take care~ PD
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea..nice to hear from you!! Jag
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Date: 8/25/2012 5:46:00 PM
Yes Andrea, that is so true. Well done. I enjoyed the window into your thoughts on this poem. Well done and congratulations on your win Lee
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Date: 8/25/2012 5:24:00 PM
Yes Andrea, sometimes when we are in that moment, we would prefer to be in and around people who makes us feel alive and rise above that dark feeling. I hate loneliness! Congrats on a big win. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/25/2012 3:32:00 PM
Deep thoughts these Andrea! Love how you've brought out the two sides of silence. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/25/2012 2:20:00 PM
Great thoughts penned...Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2012 2:06:00 PM
nice couplet......congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/25/2012 12:28:00 PM
I like this, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:25:00 AM
Very funny... Congratulations on your win! Terry
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:29:00 AM
This is nice! Thanks for your kind comments on my poems. I will keep working on my Patoum form. Thanks.
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Date: 8/17/2012 8:41:00 PM
Wow!I missed this Gem of you Andrea!Love it!
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:58:00 AM
So true on this couplet. love phyl
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Date: 8/14/2012 12:43:00 PM
Wow! nice and practical. A great philosophy is penned with a very few words. Lovely done. Best wishes for the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/14/2012 4:19:00 AM
different amd awesomely good
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:34:00 PM
Awesome couplet, Andrea. I wish you the best and luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/13/2012 3:23:00 PM
Short on time. Goood one. :)
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Date: 8/13/2012 2:03:00 PM
yes, so true, my friend. My text poem sux, btw, lmao - is that correct?
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:36:00 AM
Excellent shorty. Love, daver
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Date: 8/12/2012 2:15:00 PM
This is the truth and reality of silence! When one has it, it can be glorious, but when you have it for too long, it can be detrimental! In the dark silence can be very scary and fearsome! Your poem said a lot Andrea! I truly love this very powerful piece my friend! Great Work!!
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