Silence

SILENCE

You must expose your inner self again,
Must codify in words your pleasure or pain:
This poem will extract a part of your life,
Will cut experience free like a  knife.
No past, no future; there is only now.
Now you try to write a poem, but how?
Glasses steamed up with nervous breath,
And the thunder if  your  pencil drops:  death
Of your  thought  train  -  your  oar  falling  in a pond,
Rippling   for  ever  in your mind.
The silence is choking, you cannot call
For help.  You sink or swim alone.  No help at all.
Even clock-ticks would be a  welcome  measure 
Of your time left,  but there is no time, no pain, no pleasure
As the white paper yawns before  your pencil.
You must learn to resolve this stress - no one to counsel.
Time crawls for you, races for another:  inner strife.
You are the sole oarsman on this journey  -  your life.
………………………………………………………………………………………..

Written for  Paula Swanson’s  competition    BREATHE IN THE SILENCE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/6/2011 10:59:00 AM
Many congratulations Sydney, on your win in Paula's contest >> James
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Date: 1/5/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:08:00 AM
Very wonderful and profound - congratulations to you - Liz
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/2/2011 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your well deserved win!
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Date: 1/2/2011 2:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Paula, Sydney
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:43:00 PM
Big congrats on your win, Sydney! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:16:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your winning poem in the Silence contest with this incredible entry .. enjoy with luv this first day of 2011...
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:43:00 PM
Sydney..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:06:00 AM
You hava a great entry here, Sydney. The most frightening dream I ever had was one in which someone was attacking me and I couldn't cry out for help. At least with a pencil we have a way to convey our thoughts. Best wishes for success in the contest, Syd. I've got the flu and haven't been able to comment much lately. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:05:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Sydney. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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