Signs of My Times Fears of My Peers

Signs of My Times 
Fears of My Peers.

There were little signs
When I was a kid
Prominently posted
Certainly not hid.

They were a little rhyme
To gain parents attention
To warn them of costs
It family lacked “retention”

You could find them
In every little gift shop
The purpose of course 
Was to get kids to stop

They weren’t written by a sage
Or some really deep thinker
It was only a reminder
Your kid may be a stinker.

Lovely to look at
Delightful to hold
But if you break it
We mark it sold. 

That was the “posted” word
Some 50+ years ago
I think things are different
The signs seem to show.

Now they’re about cameras
Whose intimidating eye
Is watching you closely
Here is the “Why”

Because long years ago
The threat was ‘busy’ kids
Now it’s big sticky fingers
With big pockets well hid

It’s not careless small children
Or distracted supervision
It’s shop lifting thievery 
That’s caused this revision.

Jewelers now show
One ring at a time
Another might be replaced
With a thin silver dime.

Expensive smaller items 
Now come with small strips
To catch “careless” folks
Who may strap to their hips

New CD’s or DVD’s
Video games right and left
Almost any item in stock
Can be subject to theft. 

But I’ve no little shop
Why this growing concern
There’s a “by - line” to this
It’s something I learn

It’s in medical journals
And on my doctors lip
Watch where you walk
You don’t want to slip

You may find yourself riding 
A 4 wheeled E.R. gurney 
Something like that could be
The end of your journey

So as I’m sitting there
In my lazy boy chair
I look over at my loved one
I don’t mean to now stare

But I remember those signs
From long years now past
I am reminded our body
Wasn’t built to long last

She’s so lovely to look at
Delightful to hold
But if either one falls
We may shatter I’m told.

I guess I was reminded
By our local weather man
Who loves winter snow
Will bring it soon as he can

But winter is wrought
With slick ice under foot
I fear for our health
With one slip it’s ”kaput”.

So in the days that follow
You’re in a parking lot
Just covered with black ice
A “gray hairs” in a tough spot

Count now to ten 
You’re spry and well fit
Remember your elders
You can help them a bit. 

Allow them a moment
To get safely in their car
It may mean the world 
To keep them out of “ER”. 


Written by oldbuck, Oct. 4, 2017 in a pensive moment as he thought about changing times, changing weather, his “golden years” and the variety of concerns those topics bring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 9/10/2018 3:24:00 PM
you know the ol cliche,"the more things change, the more they stay the same."thanks for recent comment on mine pal. be well. daniel schack.
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Date: 10/26/2017 3:13:00 AM
I can relate to this .... nicely done
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/29/2017 12:25:00 PM
Her we go... another million dollars....
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Old Buck
Date: 10/26/2017 9:56:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Other than the enjoyment of writing, comments from readers are my only payment. :o) oldbuck
Date: 10/18/2017 9:50:00 AM
A story we know oh so well here in Michigan when winter gets rough. It's all too true how fragile life gets. I can't imagine an age past forty yet but I am sure it's concerning. I hope you and your beautiful lass still get to hold and cuddle and love one another for years to come, as I hope I will mine. But the most important thing to me, is the hope in your poem as I read.... is that even with age, there is heartwarming love still bonded between two. Thank you for that window into the future.
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Old Buck
Date: 10/18/2017 9:59:00 AM
Jesse: Thank you for reading some of my stuff and being willing to comment. I would caution you to continue to have a "healthy" fear of ice. 40 yrs ago, I fell on the ice and lost over 100 days of work and to this day have discomfort in my right heel. :o( As for the bond between 2 lovers, it grows even stronger but changes. :o) oldbuck
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Jesse Zerlaut
Date: 10/18/2017 9:51:00 AM
that may even be enough for me to melt my fears of ice, having lived to see my love aged and silver-haired.
Date: 10/7/2017 7:43:00 PM
Some good advice here. One must be careful when one grows older. My 62nd birthday is on October 14th. I want to stay out of the ER. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/8/2017 1:36:00 PM
Matt: Thanks for the thoughtful comment. No one likes the E.R. but they are a great place when you need one. I'm off now to read some "Anish". oldbuck
Date: 10/5/2017 6:56:00 AM
This is an excellent write my friend.. It flows and rhymes very well.. This is something everyone will ponder in their lives..
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Date: 10/5/2017 11:23:00 AM
You'd think at my age, I wouldn't waste my time like this but when I get thoughtful comments from folks, it more than "pays me back". Thanks. I'm off now to read some of your efforts. :o) oldbuck
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