Signs of Fall

Autumn approaches Her brisk winds send leaves awhirl Lone leaf loses grip For Ricks contest

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/4/2010 7:56:00 AM

good one! Joyce! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2010 10:34:00 PM

Awesome one, Joyce!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/30/2010 4:26:00 PM

A wonderful entry, Joyce! You said I had (soup mail) and have received nothing.. Sounds like i did something wrong,, or in this case said maybe..Just wondering,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 11:35:00 AM

Wow I am reading a lot of excellent poetry today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Joyce. The best to you in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/30/2010 11:11:00 AM

Beautiful entry Joyce, all the best for Rick's contest :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 10:18:00 AM

A beautiful description, Joyce, and the last line is one to which I can personally relate. Great work! Wishing you luck in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/30/2010 10:09:00 AM

I enjoy seeing the strength of some leaves who are like people..Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/30/2010 9:44:00 AM

nice one , good luck in the contest