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Autumn Haiki Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitching 09/22/24

scampering squirrels forage for little acorns swallows all fly south wizened leaves falling pirouetting down to earth log burner blazes carpet of dead leaves beautifies the forest floor biting winds and rain

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/16/2024 7:30:00 AM

Dear Jan, you do this form very well, I absolutely love the way youv painted imagery in such a vivid and creative manner! I especially love “ carpet of dead leaves beautifies the forest floor biting winds and rain” autumn is my fave time and here we dont get autumn, but i see through your words! Thank you for that! Loved it! Congratulations on another win! Sending you light

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/13/2024 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Autumn is now upon us and the beauty is always new and fresh to me. Thanks for sharing your talent. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2024 10:47:00 PM

Congrats on an awesome win, Jan.

Regina Elliott

Date: 10/9/2024 9:19:00 AM

Congratulations Jan, a lovely autumnal winning entry. Enjoy!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Regina:-) hugs Jan

Karen Croft

Date: 10/9/2024 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this Beautiful haiku!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Karen:-) hugs Jan

JCB Brul

Date: 10/9/2024 5:04:00 AM

Your haiku set perfectly blends with the autumn vibes. Congratulations dear Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:48:00 AM

Thanks so much jcb xx:-) hugs Jan

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/8/2024 12:39:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your first place with with your charming haiku set.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:47:00 AM

Thanks so much Tania I am thrilled with my placement:-) hugs Jan

James Peranteau

Date: 10/6/2024 3:53:00 PM

such the splendid dear poet....your "fairmile" and this write, jan; now out mine click click (n/a "ol' macdonald") must follow i and your muse to the appalachians...sum "fairmiles"(bed and breakfasts) that are gorgeous 'long the trail....ty...much love ')

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:46:00 AM

Thanks so much for supporting me and my poetry James, the fairmile guest house poem is very special and as for the AI AI OH poem, its so sad to see AI flooding the site, i read about 6 yesterday - so easy to detect, its sad folk cant write and post REAL poetry:-) hugs Jan

John Read

Date: 10/4/2024 10:46:00 AM

I love Autumn except for those biting winds and rain. Enjoyed reading your poem Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:44:00 AM

Thanks John, we get biting winds at any time on the isle of man but that is the joy of living here and seeing the sea and the waves! hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 10/1/2024 11:46:00 AM

Very enjoyable Jan. Well done. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:43:00 AM

Thanks so much Barry:-) hugs Jan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/29/2024 8:58:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful Haiku writes. Autumn is on the way. A great time of the year. What a great picture. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away................

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:43:00 AM

Thanks so much Paula:-) hugs Jan

Joseph May

Date: 9/26/2024 11:40:00 AM

Very nicely done Jan, best wishes

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/24/2024 8:10:00 PM

Such definite changes are an awakening. I enjoy the seasons. Thank you for this tribute to autumn.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Hilda:-) hugs Jan

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/23/2024 10:42:00 PM

Beautiful!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:41:00 AM

Aww Thanks so much Art:-)-) hugs Jan

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/23/2024 6:04:00 AM

Dear Jan, what a joy to read this morning now that we are officially in Autumn. Your Haikus are wonderful addition to my memories of the season. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2024 9:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Daniel:-) hugs Jan