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Significant Insignificance - Reversible Poem

There you are, my Earth!
I see you here next to our Moon
In this wondrous book- zoomed-in,
You shine above the rest
With cars and people everywhere-
Bridges, trains, skyscrapers, jets
Blue oceans with majestic ships-
Those wonders of our age,
Right here upon your sphere exist,
You great, important, busy, busy world.
There you are, my Earth-
           and yet-
Where are you, Earth?
Amid this endless cloud of dust
I can barely see you- just a tiny dot
In this wondrous book, zoomed out,
I find you on this page with straining eye
So lost inside our giant Milky Way 
A drifting grain of sand in time
A microscopic, whirling speck,
One of the millions, billions, trillions
Caught in cosmic winds with all the rest-
Where are you, Earth?


August 25, 2018

Contest: Wonderstruck Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori


Reversible Poem: can be read downwards
and upwards.
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Gaul Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:20 PM
The micro and macro gives us a fresh perspective. Congrats on your clever verse and fine placement. Well done.
Peck Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Sandra, A lovely painting about our tiny, bold earth, holding its head high in spite of size. Congratulations on your win!
Ashley Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Returning with well deserved congratulations, Sandra, for your wonderful win with your awesome and enjoyable poem.. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Pappadogiannis Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Congratulations Sandra!!! Well deserved :) How wonderful to imagine our Earth is such a descriptive way... So big to us and yet so tiny in this Milky Way. Loved it!
Hamilton Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 11:41 AM
Well done Sandra, congrats on a fine placement!
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Thank you, John! Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 10:16 PM
Well done, Sandra. Belated congrats on your well deserved win.
Haight Avatar
October 1, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Thank you very much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Rowe Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 5:13 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your top finish. I really enjoyed the differing perspectives on our Earth in relation to the scope of the universe. Interestingly, your pictures are almost exactly how I envisioned the poem ... reading a science book and seeing those two images on opposite pages.
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Jesse, thanks for the great, inspiring contest and for my nice placement and supportive comment. There are many very good reversible poems on your winner's list, and I was pleased to be one of them! Sandra :)
Gondolf Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Sandra, back to say congrats. I expected to see this poem on the short list. All the best. John
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 7:37 PM
Thank you once again, John! I appreciate your uplifting comment and congrats. Sandra
Daniel Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 3:04 AM
A wonderful reversible poem, Sandra:) I'm finding this contest tough..
Haight Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Thank you very much, Jo! Hugs, Sandra
Gondolf Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 4:58 PM
If we look at the universe as a whole we are pretty insignificant and yet if we look within ourselves we ARE significant. Very nicely written Sandra, best of luck. John
Haight Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 7:39 PM
Thank you so much, John! I am pleased that you read and enjoyed my poem. The mysteries of the universe captivate me. Sandra :)
Ashley Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Wow! Sandra your fabulous poem, anyway you read it, is simply spectacular! An amazing poem and such a pleasure to read. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Thank you, Susan, for your visit and lovely comment! I really enjoy writing reversible poems. Hugs, Sandra
Blown Avatar
August 25, 2018 at 8:34 PM
nicely done...a fun read
Haight Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much, Sand! Much appreciated! Sandra
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