Sign of Splendor

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["Sign of Splendor" first appeared in The Watchman Examiner in the early 1960s. It was included in my first chapbook, "The Lady in the Pink Hat," Candor Press, 1969, and it was reprinted in Grit: America's Greatest Family Newspaper, March 22, 1981. It was reprinted again in my collection of short stories and poetry, "Ashes on the Snow," Createspace, 2010.]

When a man climbs a mountain Or zooms into space, When he meets a dilemma Looks it straight in the face, His head held high He faces the sun Meeting the challenge Till victory is won. When a man storms the walls And fights for his right When he takes to the task With all of his might, He grapples with courage He conquers his fears The sign of his splendor Is reflected in tears.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/12/2021 9:26:00 PM

The last two lines resonate deep within me, Milt. They touch on a man's real-life experience and those of his comrades-in-arms. (Mine in Israel; not here). Bravo, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/13/2021 7:05:00 AM

Hey, thanks, Gershon. I appreciated your thoughtful comment. Have a terrific week!

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/12/2021 5:46:00 PM

Your write provides inspiration to anyone who has to undergo a great task.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/12/2021 7:46:00 PM

Robert, I appreciate your kind and thoughtful comment. I certainly hope that is true.

Virginia Gelok

Date: 4/12/2021 5:26:00 PM

This was so easy to read, to understand and give insight to a man's ( woman's) challenges in life !

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/12/2021 7:45:00 PM

Thanks for your thoughtful comment, Virginia. I appreciated it.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/12/2021 2:27:00 PM

Overcoming obstacles mans greatest achievements, some come at a high cost, tears of joy alas sometimes sadness, but human spirit is indomitable, great writing as always Milton, cheers David

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/12/2021 2:32:00 PM

Thanks, David, I really appreciated the time you took to read and make a comment. Cheers to you!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/12/2021 1:17:00 PM

My dad was an alpine man, he knew the value of climbing, a mountain. Thank you for sharing a delightful poem. :)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/12/2021 1:24:00 PM

Thanks so much, Mystic. I'm sure many times he faced utter frustration on the steep cliffs, but he conquered his fears. He probably also taught you to have vision and courage.