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“Sigma” 


It’s a deviant world 
a lone wolf finds a place to fit in; 
it’s pure poetry, war

heroes dance ducksteps with the romance of it all
some rise, they return home to other meaningless battles
some fall, looking for greener grass and their God 

some do not return at all
they find it better to escape
they drift off dissolving into other better or terrible worlds

it’s hard poetry, the romance of war
when you hit the revelation wall;
prayers unspoken sleep, 

demons 
with their promise of salvation 
return

they are put to bed 
roughly, like a whore 
adorned in slippery satin ribbons of red

masks now removed 
snow like medication breathed in
dreams like opium warm the cold veins 

pierce everything 
like a bayonet 
shut out the din

flood an enlarged heart 
with all its kintsugi cracks seeping honey and sin
smiling grimly the good humour well-hidden

heroes dream of taking the lead
the quiet broken, dimly lit pawns 
avoid the gun-fire and blistering burn of noisy shadows

ptsd survivors 
like voiceless poets, 
sometimes rise instead 

ruling deeply over outranked warriors




CandideDiderot ‘25






"...When you come home
I'll bake you a cake
Made of all their eyes
I wish you could see me
Dressed for the kill
You're my man of war
You're my man of war..."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/12/2025 1:34:00 AM
Phenomenal imagery & very beautifully written. Reminds me of The Pacific tv show that Steven Spielberg produced.
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Date: 8/23/2025 3:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 8/10/2025 6:49:00 PM
Sigma.
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Date: 8/10/2025 8:16:00 PM
"The term "Sigma male" is a relatively new concept, popularized on the internet, describing an individual who values independence and self-sufficiency, often preferring to operate outside traditional social hierarchies. In a military context, this could translate to a soldier who is highly competent, adaptable, and comfortable working alone or in small, self-directed teams, but who may not necessarily seek leadership positions or crave the approval of superiors."
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Date: 8/10/2025 8:14:00 PM
"Strengths: Independent and self-reliant: Sigma males thrive in situations where they can rely on their own skills and judgment, making them effective in specialized roles or when operating in remote locations. Adaptable and resourceful: Their ability to think outside the box and solve problems independently can be valuable in adapting to new and challenging situations. Quiet competence: Sigma males often demonstrate competence without needing to be the center of attention or constantly seeking validation, which can be a valuable asset in a military environment. Strong work ethic: While not driven by external rewards, Sigma males are often highly motivated to achieve their goals and excel in their chosen tasks. Resilience: Their ability to cope with solitude and challenges can make them more resilient in stressful situations."
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Date: 8/10/2025 8:14:00 PM
"Potential Challenges: Resistance to strict hierarchies: Sigma males' preference for independence might clash with the rigid structure and chain of command often found in military organizations. Difficulty with teamwork: While capable of working with others, they may prefer to operate autonomously and could struggle with the level of collaboration required in some military units. Potential for isolation: Their preference for solitude could lead to feelings of isolation or detachment from their unit if not managed carefully."
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Date: 8/10/2025 7:50:00 PM
The lone wolf trope *** https://www.verywellmind.com/what-is-a-sigma-male-8655129
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Date: 8/10/2025 6:50:00 PM
Science of People/"Sigma" male (v. Alpha, v. Beta) **** https://www.scienceofpeople.com/sigma-male/
Date: 8/10/2025 6:48:00 PM
"Man of War"/Radiohead, Thom Yorke
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Date: 8/10/2025 6:49:00 PM
https://youtu.be/d6UBb4f4imY?si=dYRKvt8mBgpwT8Of
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Date: 8/10/2025 6:49:00 PM
LYRICS/"Man of War", Radiohead (Thom Yorke). https://genius.com/Radiohead-man-of-war-lyrics
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