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Sight Not Seen

“sight not seen”


at sunrise 
clouds rise 

between 

the sun 
and me

thus this partial 
annular solar 
eclipse will 
be totally 
missed

tonight the 
earth slips 

between 

the sun 
and me

becoming
a new

moon

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia Date: 11/8/2023 12:11:00 PM Loved this one Jeff. I can take it in different ways. It' s like an abstract picture. I have to guess. Maybe tonight you face life with somebody else?..This is really intelligent. Login to Reply Jeff Connelly Date: 11/8/2023 12:41:00 PM Thank you Maria. I wrote this the night of last months solar eclipse. Here it was cloudy and so I didn't get to see it :(

Yann Rolland Date: 10/15/2023 6:32:00 PM this is quite a show, an eclipse, a surprising poem, who can work as ametaphor of love, i guess, splendid poem Jeff yann Login to Reply Jeff Connelly Date: 10/15/2023 10:53:00 PM Thanks yann... I submitted a poem the other day titled "i try to try (for yann rolland)". I hope I didn't offend you in any way yann. It was supposed to be more of a homage. Hugs

Bill Baker Date: 10/14/2023 1:34:00 PM A sight to see, Jeff. Very good poetry and very informative. Wear eye protection. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill Login to Reply Jeff Connelly Date: 10/14/2023 2:47:00 PM Thanks Bill, but no eclipse here today