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Sibling Soft Spot

Elder sister initiated the process always, I could see her, like a finch or sparrow, restless for days; Hay she collected; prepared pretty painted paper rocks, To cover up the cattle shed made brick-like hard-board blocks; Handpicked grass and plants she had to shape valleys and mountains, She had not forgotten, in her plan, feigned flawless fountains...! Splendid evergreen fir has been planted in our courtyard, She adorned it with bells, baubles, tinsel, and candy-shard; Cotton, in the form of snow-balls she skillfully bedecked, She saw to it that each thing, like the cosmos, looked perfect; Having arranged the entire scene like very Bethlehem, She pondered on vivacious ways to place the baby gem...! Lights she could not connect, since scared of electricity, It was for this she needed my friendly felicity; She admired, like a creative artist, my little ways, Of stooping and scooping betwixt her elegant knit hays; “Slowly”, she used to shout; “mildly” she used to nock; “gently!” She could not bear damage though happened incidentally...! She, in a mishap, had broken her wrist this Christmas time, Like a dove wings-clipped, she heard in her a seasonal chime; She looked at me; I looked at her; we smiled; I’ll do - I said, I'll make, for your sake, my manger-masterpiece (Jesus-bed); She watched and found everything went so beautifully well, In fondness of grand sibling love, her heart she could not tell...!!! 28 November 2022 Writing Challenge - Write A Christmas Poem - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/7/2022 11:44:00 AM
Truly special Chris. Your poem is filled with the hopeful anticipation of Christmas and the selfless love of a brother - the true spirit of Christmas comes alive in your words. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joy to you!
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Date: 12/6/2022 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations for your well-deserved win for this wonderful piece, Christuraj! And many thanks for your kind comments re my win. Merry Christmas Bpb
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/6/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thank you very much for your encouragement and support.
Date: 12/5/2022 1:27:00 AM
Christuraj, enchanting and beautiful poem, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Write A Christmas Poem, well done, blessings
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Date: 12/5/2022 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity and making me grow.
Date: 12/4/2022 2:44:00 PM
what a sweet story about your sister. Wonderful! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/5/2022 6:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for your encouragement and support.
Date: 12/3/2022 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement, Christuraj!
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Date: 12/5/2022 6:47:00 PM
Thank you very much for your valuable encouragement.
Date: 11/29/2022 12:32:00 PM
Always pleased and uplifting to read about sibling amnity and fondness such as yours. Robert
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Date: 11/30/2022 1:29:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/29/2022 4:38:00 AM
Ah, this is more than splendid, may I read it at church during my poetry reading Dec 17, I know they will love it, as I do, gl but I don't think you will need it, this masterpiece speaks for itself, lol
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/29/2022 5:47:00 AM
Thank you very much. I will be more than glad if you would do so. May God Bless You, especially during this Blessed Season!
Date: 11/28/2022 3:45:00 PM
Your finely detailed story unfolds with sister who is talented, and determined to make her project, and has you to finally finish it for her. You are lucky you have each other, Christuraj! A heartfelt mood and in the spirit of the holidays. BOF!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/29/2022 2:28:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/28/2022 2:45:00 PM
This is such a sweet, warml, lovely poem. I absolutely love its nostalgia. Best of luck in contest, Christuraj.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/29/2022 2:28:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/28/2022 7:08:00 AM
A lovely poem, Christuraj, family always comes first during this season and it's fun to share such work:)
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Date: 11/29/2022 2:29:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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