Sibling Rivalry

We were not children of privilege,
But truly didn't know it.
If our mama had a favorite,
She surely didn't show it.

Lewis was the eldest of seven
And took his position seriously.
Lloyd was playful and Charlie a joker
Who could make us laugh hysterically.

Glenn the fourth son, a peaceful lad,
Was very big and strong.
He was the baby for four years,
Before I came along.

I was the long wanted daughter
And youngest until nearly three,
When my sister Gladys was added,
The perfect playmate for me.

Seven years later Our Baby Joe,
Was born in the fall.
We welcomed him and he became
The beloved pet of all.

Our mother and daddy were loving
And never lost control.
We each had our own special place
And played a definite role.

I loved my brothers and sister
And I simply don't recall
An instance of sibling rivalry.
I think there was none at all.

My parents deserve the credit
For raising a happy brood,
Who loved and cared for each other
As brothers and sisters should.

won hm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/4/2009 3:48:00 PM
I so envy large families !! An only child until I was 8 it was very hard for me to get too excited about having the center of attention taken away ... LOL ... love your writing here and congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest!
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Date: 8/4/2009 8:47:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Joyce.rgds Brian
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Date: 8/4/2009 6:49:00 AM
What a lucky person to grow up in such a loving family! Congratulations on this warm poem, Joyce!!
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Date: 8/4/2009 3:27:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in Nathan's contest Joyce . Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on a Honorable Mention in my contest! Nate.
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Date: 7/26/2009 1:02:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Joyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 7/17/2009 7:39:00 PM
You know, Joyce, it was like this in my family, too. No playing favorites. Each of us had a unique personality and, just as in your clan, we enjoyed each other immensely. Considering some of the family tension I have read about lately, this is truly a remarkable tribute to your great family! Love, Carolyn
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