Shyness Take Over

as i look at my friends , also family with they girl love or even just friend, in look at
my self wht that can't be me i can write a girl even talk on the phone with a girl but
when i am next to her i feel scared , like i am do something wrong or stupid, i feel like
its the end of the world , shyness take over in i think i am to old for that, i can talk
tex write a beautiful girl but whats with me when when she by my side , i feel so alone in
the world like there no one for me no girls like me but just as a friend , i want you
beautiful girl were you why can't i talk to you i need you but thats the way i think
shyness is what i am it can not be break in i don't know why ........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/2/2009 11:10:00 AM
A very enjoyable read you have written and shared with us today. Thank you Jordan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 4:40:00 AM
Interesting. Shyness is inheritered trait but can be helped. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:45:00 AM
aww a great poem so expressive, many boys are shy it's not wrong to feel this way, when I met Josh he was 38 and still scared to ask me out, in fact it was a friend who said we booth have the same spirit we should get togther, I don't know what happened but we just kisssed and God did the rest, I was scared too, I had kids too but he took them on as well, been married 15 months now, God will help you find the girl just like you, thanks for your kind comments on my poem I miss you, God bless you
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