Line Gauthier Poet Senryu

Shy Teenager

shy teenager
coaxed to try on lipstick~
cracks a smile



AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Submitted on May 31, 2019 for contest  WRITING CHALLENGE 5, MAY 2019 SENRYU sponsored by DEAR HEART  -  RANKED 3RD

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Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2019 at 3:57 PM I remember this sweet one. congrats, Line.

Constance La France June 10, 2019 at 12:28 PM Line, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful Senryu ~ Line Gauthier June 10, 2019 at 1:05 PM Thank you, Constance. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2019 at 3:49 PM a lovely image. I recall my pink frost lipstick of jr high. I loved it. Line Gauthier June 1, 2019 at 7:32 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.

Timothy Mcguire May 31, 2019 at 11:36 PM And that smile lighted up the room! Line Gauthier June 1, 2019 at 3:49 AM For sure. Thanks, Timothy.

Michelle Faulkner May 31, 2019 at 4:34 PM Sounds a little like me during my teenage years- Line Gauthier May 31, 2019 at 4:43 PM Really cute, I'm sure.