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Shutlingsloe In the Snow

Petite peak a Pierrots' hat
cocked tipsy veiled bride white
pines rigid as if in pews
do not bow to the winds' harsh chime

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Lesley Grimshaw

Date: 10/21/2009 5:22:00 AM

with the standard of poetry on this website I am perplexed that I am a 'winner' please leave it at that . Though do not misunderstand me I appreciate immensely peoples words, though I am unable to repay anyone in any way.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/21/2009 3:17:00 AM

Lesley, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Elaine George

Date: 10/19/2009 3:23:00 AM

Yes! The Matterhorn of Cheshire does look exactly like a pantomine's hat. BRITTIANTLY written. Congratulations on your win, Lesley. Lainie

Lesley Grimshaw

Date: 10/15/2009 12:50:00 PM

Thankyou to all responding to this poem most appreciated.

Date: 10/15/2009 12:42:00 PM

Lesley, congratulations on having you poem selected as a winner in the Poetry Soup contest. Way to go! I hope you are enjoying this big honor. Keep on writing. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 10/14/2009 11:28:00 AM

Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2009 4:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Lesley. Love,Carol

Jim Fish

Date: 10/13/2009 10:25:00 PM

><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><

Lena Pate

Date: 10/13/2009 8:09:00 PM

Congratulations Lesley. Nicely written.

P Sheart

Date: 10/13/2009 7:34:00 PM

Lesley, Just wanted to wish you congratulations for your poem winning in the finals!! So happy for you! Love Light Truth Patty

P Sheart

Date: 10/3/2009 6:34:00 AM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/2/2009 12:22:00 PM

Lesley, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

Date: 9/25/2009 6:47:00 PM

I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

P Sheart

Date: 9/25/2009 2:26:00 PM

Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/24/2009 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Lesley. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/25/2009 10:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Lesley. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/25/2009 10:00:00 AM

Congrats Leley on your featured write. Vince

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/23/2009 1:41:00 PM

Great use imagery. Congratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando

Date: 6/22/2009 4:29:00 PM

Nice use if imagery for an interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 6/22/2009 2:07:00 PM

Excellent write! congrats!

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/22/2009 7:19:00 AM

Lesley - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ

Lesley Grimshaw

Date: 6/22/2009 4:16:00 AM

Thank you Diane