Shutlingsloe In the Snow

Petite peak a Pierrots' hat
cocked tipsy veiled bride white
pines rigid as if in pews
do not bow to the winds' harsh chime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Grimshaw Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 5:22 AM
with the standard of poetry on this website I am perplexed that I am a 'winner' please leave it at that . Though do not misunderstand me I appreciate immensely peoples words, though I am unable to repay anyone in any way.
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October 21, 2009 at 3:17 AM
Lesley, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. Lovingly, Dane Ann
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 3:23 AM
Yes! The Matterhorn of Cheshire does look exactly like a pantomine's hat. BRITTIANTLY written. Congratulations on your win, Lesley. Lainie
Grimshaw Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Thankyou to all responding to this poem most appreciated.
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October 15, 2009 at 12:42 PM
Lesley, congratulations on having you poem selected as a winner in the Poetry Soup contest. Way to go! I hope you are enjoying this big honor. Keep on writing. Karen
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:28 AM
Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Lesley. Love,Carol
Fish Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:25 PM
><>~ Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
Pate Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations Lesley. Nicely written.
Sheart Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:34 PM
Lesley, Just wanted to wish you congratulations for your poem winning in the finals!! So happy for you! Love Light Truth Patty
Sheart Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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October 2, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Lesley, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 6:47 PM
I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Sheart Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 2:26 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Lesley. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Lesley. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 10:00 AM
Congrats Leley on your featured write. Vince
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June 23, 2009 at 1:41 PM
Great use imagery. Congratulations on your featured poetry. Ernilando
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June 22, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Nice use if imagery for an interesting view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 2:07 PM
Excellent write! congrats!
Jordan Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Lesley - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
Grimshaw Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 4:16 AM
Thank you Diane
Christian Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 2:21 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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