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How Are You Feeling Today Poetry Contest

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Third Place

 

Rene Magritte 1928 The Lovers I and II 

Shrouded

Muffled dialogue ennui sequestered intimacy so distant,
                                                    smothered in ebbing surreptitious fantasy.
                                                                              Musing how close is close?

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Linda Alice Fowler October 17, 2023 at 10:25 AM Hello my dear bff. Congratulations! :) Linda Alice Fowler October 18, 2023 at 8:18 AM PS only allows me one comment to you per yearly quarter LOL! I Am Anaya October 17, 2023 at 10:31 AM Hi Linda Alice, so good to see your little face...you know absence makes the heart grow fonder, but C'mon once in a blue moon makes one forget. lol stop by more often! ;D Thank you! bff's always, Anaya

Karen Jones October 17, 2023 at 2:30 AM Congratulations on your win! I Am Anaya October 17, 2023 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Karen!

Charlotte Puddifoot October 16, 2023 at 1:24 PM this is one of the best ones i've read, intriguing and deep - congrats on your win in the contest, and thanks for commenting on mine :) I Am Anaya October 17, 2023 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Charlotte! You're very welcome, my friend. xo

Ink Empress October 15, 2023 at 10:35 AM How close is close? Whoa! What an intriguing one this is! And so much depth in your words! I can feel the smothered thoughts flowing creatively! Always a pleasure reading your work talented Anaya! I Am Anaya October 15, 2023 at 10:52 AM It was a day of staring at the paintings of Rene and thoughts of what he was thinking, well, what I was thinking on that day, just fit nicely. Thank you, Ink for your kind words! :)

Silent One October 15, 2023 at 8:45 AM Powerful one... Congratulations on your win in the contest. I Am Anaya October 15, 2023 at 10:49 AM Thank you for the placement Silent One, I really enjoyed the contest! Looking forward to more. Have a good one! :D

Victor Buhagiar October 10, 2023 at 8:36 AM Deep thoughts. So much closeness can be deceptive. Blessings I Am Anaya October 10, 2023 at 1:30 PM A feeling of void perhaps, having a moment, in seventeen words. :)