Shrouded

Muffled dialogue ennui sequestered intimacy so distant,
                                                    smothered in ebbing surreptitious fantasy.
                                                                              Musing how close is close?

desirehow i feelverse

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/17/2023 10:25:00 AM

Hello my dear bff. Congratulations! :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/18/2023 8:18:00 AM

PS only allows me one comment to you per yearly quarter LOL!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/17/2023 10:31:00 AM

Hi Linda Alice, so good to see your little face...you know absence makes the heart grow fonder, but C'mon once in a blue moon makes one forget. lol stop by more often! ;D Thank you! bff's always, Anaya

Karen Jones

Date: 10/17/2023 2:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/17/2023 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, Karen!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2023 1:24:00 PM

this is one of the best ones i've read, intriguing and deep - congrats on your win in the contest, and thanks for commenting on mine :)

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/17/2023 9:38:00 AM

Thank you, Charlotte! You're very welcome, my friend. xo

Ink Empress

Date: 10/15/2023 10:35:00 AM

How close is close? Whoa! What an intriguing one this is! And so much depth in your words! I can feel the smothered thoughts flowing creatively! Always a pleasure reading your work talented Anaya!

I Am Anaya
Date: 10/15/2023 10:52:00 AM

It was a day of staring at the paintings of Rene and thoughts of what he was thinking, well, what I was thinking on that day, just fit nicely. Thank you, Ink for your kind words! :)