Shroud Of Dusk

I love the twinklings of light in the darkened streets.

Great poem Paige, congratulations

Congrats on your placement, PH. We knew this is a gem. Well done, Sweets. X.

There’s something very cinematic about this, sunlight breaking through shadows, then fading into streetlights. It captures that in-between moment of dusk really beautifully. I can feel the melancholy.... You have developed into a very good poet... have come a long way and you should be very proud of yourself... keep on writing my friend... Blessings..

Wow, how did I never see this? I like it very much. Congrats for your win

Nice poem, Paige.

Your love for sensing sunset linings, lays deeply within the lights gleam! Great entry xX

Interesting, Paige, I too chose the same theme:)

wonderfully descriptive words, dear Paige. Solid contest entry! wishing you well, hugs, Sara

Lovely visceral description of dusk as shroud : I feel the light and shadows. Good last line & catchy title. Best for contest, Sweets.xxx. (Happy to see you entering a contest)

great poem, for touching my soul, enjoyed twice, thanks poet Paige

Hello Paige :-) Interesting read indeed. Sun light is the greatest light!! A favorite! Have a nice day ~ AA

Paige, so wonderfully descriptive of twilight in the city! You are so observant! I enjoyed this poem as dusk in the city is a favorite time of day for me and reminds me of the song "When the lights go down in the city." Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

With the fall of dusk, sun will be shadowed and streetlights will begin to blink. Well written dear Paige. All the best.