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Shroud of Brethren Blood

A ribbon of peace made of red, white and blue Had fallen to earth on a breeze With hopes that someone would take and hold true The values so needed for peace Alive in the colors, representation of man The struggles in life so endured All sewn together in one tight fine weave Offering to all, peace assured

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/26/2008 10:14:00 PM
Michael - Beautiful poem - very profound message thank you Michael for your comments and support - God bless
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Date: 8/26/2008 11:31:00 AM
a very touching piece and a great message. thank you for reading my so many summers ago and for your comment.
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Date: 8/26/2008 9:20:00 AM
P.S. Again! Fixed it!! Thanks once more!
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Date: 8/26/2008 9:06:00 AM
You were so in tune with my poem, "The Wren"....I got called away during the writing, and posted it as it was. Like you...I too, didn't really feel that I wrapped it up quite right....I will have to work with it. Thanks for the observation!!...Carrie (PS. You have been very helpful with all my poetry..Thanks again!)
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Date: 8/26/2008 6:09:00 AM
Glory glory!! Beautiful tribute to the red, white and blue! Nice one, Michael!...Best wishes...Carrie
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