Shrinkage

Poor Adam in Eden’s first winter Would run home but Eve was no sprinter They walked in the nude Eve said, which was rude ‘Oh, that’s a strange place for a splinter’

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 1/12/2021 11:23:00 PM

Howl . . . : )

Terry Flood
Date: 1/13/2021 12:30:00 AM

Thank you for you distinctly succinct comment, Iniana. ;-)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/10/2021 6:28:00 AM

Teehee...Eve was not very tactful, was she? Quite a cute limerick Terry! Linda

Terry Flood
Date: 1/10/2021 8:53:00 AM

Honestly... women!!! Glad you liked it. Terry

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/5/2021 5:14:00 PM

G’day Terry … very witty indeed Terry. Cold weather has an affect on a woman’s eyes I’d say - thanks Terry - Lindsay

Terry Flood
Date: 1/6/2021 3:53:00 PM

Thanks, Lindsay. You may find this amusing... my wife struggles with small print, so, because she likes to read before going to sleep... she keeps a bloody great magnifying glass by the bed. I often wonder what a burglar would think. Happy new year, Lindsay. Terry