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Showtime for Spring Premiere Contest Winner

Showtime for Spring yellow sprinkles spring with daffodils and crocus ~ sunbeams tickle boughs pink petal flurries spring breathes out apple blossoms ~ puddles of color lavender shadows splash in a lilac perfume ~ purple eclipse glows ~ orange bathes in dawn painting the poppy meadows ~ showtime for tulips shooting star flowers borrows blue from sapphire skies ~ rainbow confetti woodlands spawn teardrops non-pariels of snowdrops ~ moontime coronas

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Date: 5/1/2024 1:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem Sam--well deserving of the accolades, BIG congrats on your trophy win.
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Date: 4/26/2024 8:01:00 PM
Gorgeous- congrats on the win, well deserved, loved the last stanza, such a beautiful image
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Date: 4/23/2024 10:49:00 AM
A vivid description of spring splendor, Sam. Beautifully penned. -Smita
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/23/2024 10:54:00 AM
Hi Smita! Thank you so much for your lovely compliments! I am so glad you were able to feel the joy of spring and revel in this amazing season through this poem. Sending you blessings of spring joy!
Date: 4/20/2024 4:22:00 AM
Dear samszy, beautiful use of colors to depict spring and flow in such seamless rhythm, in the form of haiku! Youv written a very artistic take and i love so many lines in this especially, “ lavender shadows splash in a lilac perfume ~ purple eclipse glows ~” so gorgeous! I always have a thing for lilac and lavender and also love how youv written “ eclipse glows” as well as the ending! Beautiful! Soul warming really and fitting for the mood right now for many! Congratulations on your win too
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/22/2024 11:12:00 AM
Dearest Inky! I couldn’t help but think of you, and your intrinsic understanding of color especially in poetry, when writing this poem. Thank so much for your beautiful feedback that warmed my heart. I am so happy we get to share the beauty of this amazing season! And, yes, I too love lilac and lavender especially in sunsets! Take care, dear friend. Sending you blessings of joy!!
Date: 4/20/2024 4:18:00 AM
Hi Sam, this is without doubt one of the most beautiful poems I've had the pleasure to read, this is poetry at its finest , congratulations on your deserved win . Daniel
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/22/2024 11:05:00 AM
Hi Daniel! I am so honored by your gracious comments! Thank you! You really made my day. We have had an amazing spring especially after all of the rain we have had this past winter. The world just burst into bloom! So happy you enjoyed this haiku string. It was a delightful experience to look around me and see the new miracles every day. Sending you blessings of spring joy!!
Date: 4/19/2024 4:42:00 PM
you painted such delightful images with your descriptive words. I liked the title and the poem was certainly illustrative of spring's wonderous showtime. I particularly liked these sunny and colorful lines: pink petal flurries spring breathes out apple blossoms ~ puddles of color How refreshing and invigorating your poem is. Wishing you a wonderful spring evening, Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/22/2024 11:00:00 AM
Hi Sara! Thank you so much for your response to this poem. I am so happy that you felt the invigorating joy of spring. It is an amazing feeling to watch spring show off in colors, flowers and in the skies. Sending you blessings of spring joy!!
Date: 4/19/2024 4:26:00 PM
This is beautiful, Sam, and so welcome! I really love "orange bathes in dawn." So much beautiful color! I love spring.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/19/2024 10:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann. I just love looking at a spring garden filled with every color of the rainbow! Truly it is a welcoming sight. It was so much fun to spread out that rainbow in each haiku! I hope you have a wonderful weekend! Blessing.
Date: 4/19/2024 1:43:00 PM
What a colorful/creative Haiku Spring write. Love It... Have a wonderful spring weekend...............
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/19/2024 10:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula! I love that we share a love of flowers especially in the spring! Have a wonderful weekend. Blessings to you!

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