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Shower Me With Your Love

Shower me with your love… Observe pain as it streams from sky blue eyes; burning and insuppressible, unshed tears drench as transformation comes to pass. Watch as it seeps from pores, releasing poisoned beliefs, acrid thoughts, and toxic misgivings, flushing fear and hurt from core. As grief, sorrow, heartache and dismay are squeezed from each cell of my being, remain, for they will unfailingly step forth now to bid one final adieu. Rain down on me as all is cast into oblivion… Witness as jagged breaths and uneasy rhythm are restored to deep and effective cycles; breathing without hesitation, no longer an effort for trust is emerging in realization that love truly exists, devotion is more than an unachievable concept, and loyalty is an inner promise, a personal oath made with honor and integrity, a determination to stay true, not some façade or falsity spoken for outward approval or regard. Hold on, for my smile has finally reappeared… Then, nurture me and nourish my being, my soul… adore me. Let me feel the warmth of your essence entwined with mine; the tenderness of your touch as it soothes me into euphoria, the softness of your lips tasting, caressing, lingering until I am certain they belong to me alone. In the comfort of your embrace, this once-in-a-lifetime place where serenity flows through me, enchanting me, enticing me, thrilling me, imploring me… my heart nearly bursts with rapture, longing, and sweet ecstasy in this new-found freedom and fearless expression. It is here, in this moment, I finally lower my guard, demolish all walls, for I know I am safe and protected. I am yours, and eagerly share with you an untapped, yet infinite, well of passion, love, affection, adoration, devotion, and tenderness. I will love you like I mean it, passionately and playfully, honestly and joyfully, with fervor and fever, forever to eternity. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 12/1/2019 For Love Me Like You Mean It Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Date: 1/20/2020 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/23/2020 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve!! hugs :)
Date: 12/6/2019 7:30:00 AM
This will no doubt be in the winner's circle with a flowered garland around her neck.
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Date: 12/9/2019 9:49:00 PM
Honored that you shared this with me... Thank you so very much, Caren :)
Date: 12/3/2019 8:15:00 AM
I would choose to shower twice a day for this experience. ;0)
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:47:00 PM
Lol. Cute ;)
Date: 12/3/2019 3:01:00 AM
- A beautiful poem with strong emotions describing your love ... deeply and beautifully, H.T. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/3/2019 8:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for the visit and kind words :) hugs
Date: 12/2/2019 12:47:00 PM
Wow, I am breathless after reading this amazing poem of love, desire and true affection. This touched the deepest part of my heart my friend, what started out with sadness and loneliness ended in jubilant and choir singing love that produces the biggest smile on my face. I really am left speechless here...sigh. So very beautiful. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 12/2/2019 1:03:00 PM
Wow, thank you so much, Chris! I know it was hard to predict where it would go, but I'm so glad you stuck around until the end :) Your feedback is always very much appreciated...Thank you, again.
Date: 12/1/2019 12:19:00 PM
this one touches deeply...one can feel this poem breathing...great take on the contest theme, i am sure this one will place high... wonderful penning HT :) hugs
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Date: 12/1/2019 2:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra. I am so happy to hear that this made an impact, especially since this format is out of my comfort zone ;) Thank you for the vote of confidence, too :) hugs
Date: 12/1/2019 7:02:00 AM
I felt the intensity and fire in every word--what a passionate poem you wrote my friend. I like the turn you poem takes..adorning it in virtues of true love--splendidly done, HT. A winning poem you wrote.
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Date: 12/1/2019 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. I am thrilled to know you enjoyed this poem so much...I really appreciate your feedback and compliments!!

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