Shower Me With Your Love

Shower me with your love…

Observe pain as it streams from sky blue eyes;
burning and insuppressible, unshed tears
drench as transformation comes to pass.

Watch as it seeps from pores, releasing 
poisoned beliefs, acrid thoughts, and toxic 
misgivings, flushing fear and hurt from core.

As grief, sorrow, heartache and dismay are 
squeezed from each cell of my being, remain, for
they will unfailingly step forth now to bid one final adieu.

Rain down on me as all is cast into oblivion…

Witness as jagged breaths and uneasy rhythm are
restored to deep and effective cycles; breathing 
without hesitation, no longer an effort for 
trust is emerging in realization that
love truly exists, devotion is more than an 
unachievable concept, and loyalty is an inner
promise, a personal oath made with honor and
integrity, a determination to stay true, not some
façade or falsity spoken for outward approval or regard.

Hold on, for my smile has finally reappeared…

Then, nurture me and nourish my being, my soul… adore me.
Let me feel the warmth of your essence entwined with mine; 
the tenderness of your touch as it soothes me into euphoria,
the softness of your lips tasting, caressing, lingering
until I am certain they belong to me alone.

In the comfort of your embrace,
this once-in-a-lifetime place where
serenity flows through me, enchanting me,
enticing me, thrilling me, imploring me…
my heart nearly bursts with rapture, longing,
and sweet ecstasy in this new-found 
freedom and fearless expression.

It is here, in this moment, I finally lower my guard, 
demolish all walls, for I know I am safe and protected.
I am yours, and eagerly share with you an untapped, yet 
infinite, well of passion, love, affection, adoration, 
devotion, and tenderness. 

I will love you like I mean it, passionately and playfully, 
honestly and joyfully, with fervor and fever, forever to eternity.


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12/1/2019
For Love Me Like You Mean It Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Roper Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
There Avatar
January 23, 2020 at 4:46 PM
Thank you so much, Eve!! hugs :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2019 at 7:30 AM
This will no doubt be in the winner's circle with a flowered garland around her neck.
There Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Honored that you shared this with me... Thank you so very much, Caren :)
Lamoureux Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:15 AM
I would choose to shower twice a day for this experience. ;0)
There Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Lol. Cute ;)
Andresen Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 3:01 AM
- A beautiful poem with strong emotions describing your love ... deeply and beautifully, H.T. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
There Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:47 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for the visit and kind words :) hugs
Green Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 12:47 PM
Wow, I am breathless after reading this amazing poem of love, desire and true affection. This touched the deepest part of my heart my friend, what started out with sadness and loneliness ended in jubilant and choir singing love that produces the biggest smile on my face. I really am left speechless here...sigh. So very beautiful. Best wishes in the contest.
There Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 1:03 PM
Wow, thank you so much, Chris! I know it was hard to predict where it would go, but I'm so glad you stuck around until the end :) Your feedback is always very much appreciated...Thank you, again.
Adams Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 12:19 PM
this one touches deeply...one can feel this poem breathing...great take on the contest theme, i am sure this one will place high... wonderful penning HT :) hugs
There Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra. I am so happy to hear that this made an impact, especially since this format is out of my comfort zone ;) Thank you for the vote of confidence, too :) hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 7:02 AM
I felt the intensity and fire in every word--what a passionate poem you wrote my friend. I like the turn you poem takes..adorning it in virtues of true love--splendidly done, HT. A winning poem you wrote.
There Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 2:55 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay. I am thrilled to know you enjoyed this poem so much...I really appreciate your feedback and compliments!!
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