Showdown

A sure shot, he sets up a can, and digs his heels in the sand
feet spread, a hat on his head, a gun in his hand: he looks grand.
Cloudy skies shade the sun from his eyes, letting him aim as planned:
and that can, flew apart, just like he knew it would, beforehand.
His friend wants to end their partnership, he said as much, offhand:
a showdown’s coming; it'll all come down to who's quick of hand.
Their morels a hoax: they rob folks and sell stolen contraband
and hide their cash in the wetlands, stashing their loot in quicksand.

Two of the roughest, toughest gringos north of the Rio Grande
stand ready to test how much pain the other man can withstand.
Their shared desire to fire... will send one man to the promised land:
this is life and death, final breath, well beyond a reprimand.
They're fighting for reasons neither man can quite understand:
it's all about ego, and which gunslinger is in command.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 11:12 PM
A clever take on this contest. Congratulations on your win with this western showdown!
Pinet Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Lovely poem about a macho showdown. A real fun read, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 11:37 PM
Awesome write, Emile, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile
Canerdy Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Congrats on a well-deserved win, Emile! Janice
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile
Rodrigues Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on a fine write, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 4:44 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Michelle Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your third place win in my Rhyme Battle contest! Great job, Love, Juli-Michelle
Pinet Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Thanks Juli, I appreciate the placement, Emile.
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