Get Your Premium Membership

Show Me the Road To Paradise

where is the road to Paradise? will someone please show me the way? have lived life without any vice, but I have never learnt to pray! the Priest’s sermon was full of verse he read from an old, old scripture, he was greedy and took my purse, as price for his holy lecture! the temple bells chime, chime all day, a divine sound that fills the air, won’t be blessed if you don't pay, is sale of blessings any fair? they rushed to the mosque for their prayers, Friday en masse to bow their heads, they rushed passed hungry street beggars, could they have stopped, fed them instead? I have turned pages of Holy books, to read stories of bygone days, moral truth is not what it looks, nor is earth as flat as it says! So will someone please tell the way, to much sought haven, paradise? meanwhile I think best way to pray, is to do good and do no vice!
written 27/03/2021 All yours(March 31) Brian Strand sponsored 8 syllables each line

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/27/2021 4:26:00 AM
Look like you’ve cracked the code!
Login to Reply
Radhakrishna Avatar
Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/27/2021 9:31:00 AM
Thanks Seeker! still finding the way!:)
Date: 3/27/2021 4:12:00 AM
Your last line will lead you to paradise Krish, going to the church or the mosque becomes meaningless if you dont follow it up with action Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Login to Reply
Radhakrishna Avatar
Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/27/2021 6:11:00 AM
Tom, thanks! you are so right!!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things