Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Free verse

Show Me God

Do this and do that!
Why am I not to decide what?
Don’t do this, don’t do that!
Why am I in doubts?
This is sin and this is good.
To me this seems good and that seems evil!
Then this seems evil and that seems good!
Not for me to decide, why?
What confusion!
What seems evil is for good.
I say NO! I suffer, so it’s evil.
They say NO! It’s for good!
Who said so?
Show me God!
I feel good in what I and others feel good.
I choose what doesn’t make me suffer.
I understand my way, what is evil and what is good.
So, please don’t bother to show me God!
I’ll find it myself….

6/09/16
Muse on the loose

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Andrea Dietrich September 7, 2016 at 3:23 PM gosh, this reminds me of myself when I was experiencing a lot of questioning in my life and deciding the path for myself to walk. I like the brave way you presented this. Sunita U.D Palawon September 7, 2016 at 9:33 PM I'm glad you can find yourself somewhere in the poem and I think we all at a time in life don't want just to take what comes our way...human nature and this reminds me the amount of questions that come from my adolescent children. Thanks for the read. Love Sunita

Winged Warrior September 7, 2016 at 9:51 AM You have shown us yourself...that's all we need for now...great write Sunita...god bless...^WW^ Sunita U.D Palawon September 7, 2016 at 11:29 AM :D Thanks for the appreciation WW. I'm glad with your views. GL in your endeavors. :) Sunita

Daniel Turner September 6, 2016 at 8:46 AM I think if you know right from wrong, you probably already have:) Enjoyed reading you today, Sunita. Sunita U.D Palawon September 6, 2016 at 12:31 PM I appreciate your words and the incentives it give. Thanks Daniel and good luck in all your endeavors! :) Sunita

David Smith September 6, 2016 at 6:34 AM Good one for us all to think on. Glad I decided to look at your latest work. This one flows nicely, has a beat to t you can feel. Best regards David Sunita U.D Palawon September 6, 2016 at 12:28 PM So glad you appreciate David, your comment is so encouraging. GL with your writing! :) Sunita