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I had placed Reeses cups in a bowl There to snack anytime- with control The large family size- Hubby eyed with surprise Said restraint was to be his new goal! But each morning I saw there was less And I felt that he had to confess That he snuck some away- To munch on through the day! He said NO, and like me, felt some stress! This went on- and so soon bowl was bare! I moved on like I just didn't care- And continued to dust- Clean inside was a must Of a living room cabinet there. I yelled WOW!- when I saw there inside All the Reeses a mouse brought to hide! Dragged them there one by one Till his project was done! That field mouse took us both for a ride! Now, this story I told you is true- Shoulda known mice all do what they do. But this feat was extreme A lone field mouse's dream- Gave him credit where credit is due! February 3, 2023 Contest: Shouda Seen It Coming Sponsor: John Lawless Syllable Count: 9 and 6 --/--/--/ --/--/

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Date: 2/26/2023 4:25:00 PM
Next time you cook up a treat, and want to keep them for yourselves to eat, there are two choices with which to roll. Firstly put a lid on the bowl or the second is that, you definitely need a cat. You made a very humorous poem Sandra. I liked it.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/2/2023 6:50:00 AM
Hi Merv, thanks for visiting and enjoying my poem! Yes, you are right- a lid and a cat would have helped a lot!!! Sandra ;)
Date: 2/8/2023 1:12:00 PM
Gotta say, I feel so happy for that clever little mouse! Great series of limericks Sandra, congrats!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/13/2023 9:01:00 AM
Yes, it was quite inventive to figure out this scheme for survival! Thank you for reading my poem and leaving your nice comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 2/8/2023 11:01:00 AM
Ah, the little field mice love to come inside and make a mess, don't they? LOL. Congratulations on your delightful win Sandra! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/13/2023 9:02:00 AM
Ha Ha, yes, Linda, it was quite an experience getting to the bottom of the missing candy! Thank you for your uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra

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