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Should I

Should I open wide my arms
And let you in
Or wrap them tight about my charms
Should I open wide my arms
Will these emotions set off alarms
Is there something here we could begin
Should I open wide my arms
And let you in


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Gershon Wolf Date: 5/21/2020 8:21:00 PM You've asked the tough questions so well within the framework of the poetic style. These are 'biggies!' Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/20/2020 10:27:00 AM This is unbelievably romantic. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/20/2020 10:47:00 AM so nice to have your comments again. You always make me feel welcome here.

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/19/2020 12:41:00 AM Oh! What a delightful write. Almost begs the reader to shout out. YES! Open your arms! :) Thanks for your visit to my blog and good luck in the oconest. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/19/2020 9:11:00 PM sometimes I am not sure where it comes from but I love being in tune with the muse and going with first thoughts that then flow into the whole. I'm so delighted you enjoyed my poem Eileen.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 5/18/2020 8:08:00 PM This is a lovely triolet, Jeanne, that flows so well. Have a great night! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/19/2020 9:10:00 PM Thanks Rhonda...it has been lovely these past evenings. Hope you are doing well.

Juliet Ligon Date: 5/18/2020 5:45:00 PM This can be a vulnerable thing sometimes. The form is very fitting. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/18/2020 6:49:00 PM ...I too was happy with how my thoughts fit the form and worked. Thanks for your comments. Really appreciated

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/18/2020 4:59:00 PM A wonderful way to use the musicality of this triolet! Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 5/18/2020 6:47:00 PM Thank you Kim...it's only the third time I have tried my hand at a triolet...like with the pantoum, you need to write what will flow as it is used again...the other efforts didn't go as well, lol