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Shot On Valentines Day

Cupid tapped my sailor on the shoulder, “That one…” he pointed at me. He aimed at me, sent the sailor’s seabag too - we shoot to the top of Everest with all its dangers. We tumble and climb, tumble and climb until at last we are forever in each other’s grasp. My sailor proposed too fast with a golden ring. I accepted after he begged for two weeks. Mind over matter was defeated by head over heels. I had been shy. If we had met earlier we might have passed by each other but the playing field was all new. There was adventure in his soul and longing in my heart to soar to new heights. The sailor’s seabag was heavy with his past but he found love and loves (children and grands) and a God that was bigger than everything. Tulips delirious dance, twelve with big fat leaves. Tulips alive with life not death. Roses hold beauty but tulips last. A sailor’s ring surrounds my finger. Ebon-etched leaves, unique. Cupid’s bow in shadowbox - a little worn and bent in our heart shape. 2/7/2021

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Date: 2/10/2021 5:18:00 AM
Some clever lines in this romantic reminisce, Kim. Right decisions never grow stale. / Maurice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/10/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thank you, Maurice! :)
Date: 2/8/2021 2:13:00 PM
Very original story telling (is it's true??) Or maybe not! My mom met my dad in the navy. In those days she was called a Wave!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2021 7:08:00 PM
Which parts...lol! There is a ring of truth!
Date: 2/8/2021 5:56:00 AM
Kim, I love this poem. And, "mind over matter was defeated by head over heels" Very clever.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2021 7:07:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 2/7/2021 8:55:00 PM
A Romance that started on Valentines day, Not only a lifetime love. but a poetic one..Love this..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2021 4:04:00 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Date: 2/7/2021 4:27:00 PM
The 'shot heard 'round the world.' Or at least 'at the top of the world.' HVD, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2021 4:05:00 AM
Your comments are always fun, sweet poet! What is HVD?
Date: 2/7/2021 10:28:00 AM
This is too sweet. Loved every word. A fave for me. Congrats. God Bless JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Judy! <3
Date: 2/7/2021 8:33:00 AM
And my they live happily ever after. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:12:00 AM
Thank you, dear one! <3
Date: 2/7/2021 8:20:00 AM
Cupid's arrow strikes again, Nicely penned Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:11:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph! <3
Date: 2/7/2021 7:16:00 AM
A sweet story for valentine's day, Kim. Be in love for ever my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend! <3
Date: 2/7/2021 7:11:00 AM
Cupid knew what she was doing. Loved the “two week begging” part.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:11:00 AM
Oh it’s what really happened! He has no excuses ;)
Date: 2/7/2021 6:42:00 AM
Kim, this is a masterpiece--a moving, descriptive blend of literal language and deeply meaningful and romantic symbolism! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Janice! <3
Date: 2/7/2021 5:56:00 AM
Tender, inspiring, and romantic, dearest Kim! If only all arrows found such loving hearts to rest upon, a better world we would have! Blessings and hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios! <3
Date: 2/7/2021 5:55:00 AM
Cupid certainly hit the bullseye Kim, hope you both have many happy years together. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/7/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thank you, Tom <3

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