Shot On Valentines Day

Cupid tapped my sailor on the shoulder,
“That one…” he pointed at me.
He aimed at me, sent the sailor’s seabag too -
we shoot to the top of Everest
with all its dangers.
We tumble and climb, tumble and climb
until at last we are forever in each other’s grasp.

My sailor proposed too fast with a golden ring.
I accepted after he begged for two weeks.
Mind over matter was defeated by head over heels.

I had been shy. If we had met earlier we might have passed by
each other but the playing field was all new. There was adventure 
in his soul and longing in my heart to soar to new heights.

The sailor’s seabag was heavy with his past
but he found love and loves (children and grands)
and a God that was bigger than everything.

Tulips delirious dance, twelve with big fat leaves. Tulips alive
with life not death. Roses hold beauty but tulips last.

A sailor’s ring surrounds my finger. Ebon-etched leaves, unique.
Cupid’s bow in shadowbox - a little worn and bent in our heart shape.

2/7/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rigoler Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:18 AM
Some clever lines in this romantic reminisce, Kim. Right decisions never grow stale. / Maurice
Rodrigues Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 9:22 AM
Thank you, Maurice! :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Very original story telling (is it's true??) Or maybe not! My mom met my dad in the navy. In those days she was called a Wave!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 7:08 PM
Which parts...lol! There is a ring of truth!
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 8:55 PM
A Romance that started on Valentines day, Not only a lifetime love. but a poetic one..Love this..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 4:04 AM
Thank you, Harry!
Wolf Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 4:27 PM
The 'shot heard 'round the world.' Or at least 'at the top of the world.' HVD, Kim! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2021 at 4:05 AM
Your comments are always fun, sweet poet! What is HVD?
Ball Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:28 AM
This is too sweet. Loved every word. A fave for me. Congrats. God Bless JB
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 4:08 PM
Thank you, Judy! <3
Buhagiar Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 8:33 AM
And my they live happily ever after. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Thank you, dear one! <3
May Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Cupid's arrow strikes again, Nicely penned Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Thank you, Joseph! <3
Pandit Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 7:16 AM
A sweet story for valentine's day, Kim. Be in love for ever my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Thank you so much, dear friend! <3
Krutsinger Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Cupid knew what she was doing. Loved the “two week begging” part.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Oh it’s what really happened! He has no excuses ;)
Canerdy Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Kim, this is a masterpiece--a moving, descriptive blend of literal language and deeply meaningful and romantic symbolism! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, Janice! <3
Trifiatis Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 5:56 AM
Tender, inspiring, and romantic, dearest Kim! If only all arrows found such loving hearts to rest upon, a better world we would have! Blessings and hugs xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, Demetrios! <3
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Cupid certainly hit the bullseye Kim, hope you both have many happy years together. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2021 at 10:09 AM
Thank you, Tom <3
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