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graveyard shorter path... fumbles six feet down ...schooled by the moonlight 8/15/2018

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Date: 8/16/2018 4:37:00 PM
Cute one. I have read several stories about people falling into freshly dug empty graves. Lots of thought went into this I am sure. Thanks for dropping by. It is good to know that your husband did not get hurt or worse when he jumped. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2018 5:00:00 PM
Based on true story.
Date: 8/15/2018 8:11:00 PM
I am going to have to steal "schooled by the moonlight". No. It would not be right, but it is SO right, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 8:23:00 PM
LOL, Caren!
Date: 8/15/2018 3:42:00 PM
that is a cool way to say it, Kim. Schooled by the moonlight. I really like that.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 8/15/2018 3:04:00 PM
That's for sure. Really cool Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/15/2018 2:39:00 PM
Very spooky haiku, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thanks, Michelle!

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