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Shoreline's Memoirs

Lapping against the shoreline’s edge,
Fluid quartz-crystal of waves rush
through my toes . As I align home-made
paper boats wiggling against ebb tide,  
the looped hammock of moon gently cradles 
strains from Jobim’s notes, ‘ Agua de Beber, ’ 
where summer memoirs  drip inside my veins:
On this familiar trail, he would nestle
A cocktail of stars unto my hands… riding
upon the torrid  pulse of a bamboo’s gyre,
quietly leading me into the fragrant sea
that we, dream-walkers , mesh atop an islet’s breast.

Yet now, only silence mates a heart gazing at
paper boats, humped sandstone  far off a ridge
that in  August’s glittering last queue,
hints of ‘Agua de Beber’ speak to me
about a current,  paddling on a waterfront,

Gentle and wild as the tidal net of retrospect.



Contest: Laura Loo's Any Poem written in February 2016
Submitted 2/12/2017
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Originally posted 2/ 5/ 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Just gorgeous sweet Nette! thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Lamoureux Avatar
February 13, 2017 at 10:30 AM
You do nature with style Nette. Congrats and a hug.
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 11:05 AM
so beautifully penned Nette, though most of your poems are rich in beauty....congrats on your win!
Jerden Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Your style is instantly recognizable even without centering, Nette. I too, love Jobim. congratulations. Fine, unique imagery.
A   Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Nette, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:14 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write nette.. exquisite work..
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 1:48 AM
This is wonderful Nette. Congratulations on your second place win! Very deserving of the honor!
Wigley Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 10:52 PM
This is terrific, nette, simply lovely and wistful. A worthy topster. Well done. Viv x
Gentry Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Congratulations on your win. Totally awesome! A 7
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Nette, you are queen of imaginative imagery, using such unique, descriptive words and concepts! Congrats on your win :)
Parker Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Congratulations my poetic friend, a beautiful poem indeed
Scars Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Lovely Nette, congrats on your placement!! *smiles* -luloo
Haight Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Amazing, Nette. Such lovely imagery painted with beautiful words. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 3:53 PM
>>>>back with congratulations, Nette! There were never any doubts that this poem would be a top winner! hugs // paul
Duggan Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 6:53 PM
Beautiful verse Nette, ah! the seashore, we live just down the road from the seashore and quite often go down to paddle, look out to the ocean especially as the sun goes down, everything in this verse relates to what we see, loved it, take care..........Vera
Fraser Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Your poem flows with passion and grace Nett. I like this one alot then again Im a water nut. Blessings Carl
Devnath  Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 1:32 PM
A nice heartfelt song like poem, music rings clearly in ear in loneliness of silence. Good luck,bl
Callus Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Awesome intoxicating poetry, Nette, accompanied by this gentle jazz music that takes me way back in time! You are in a class of your own...I bow to you! hugs // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:57 PM
You must be an old soul to write with such depth of passion. Really beautiful Nette!
Martin Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Loved this one, Nette! good luck in contest! Memorable! a 7 at least!
Nunez Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 7:20 PM
Hauntingly beautiful, Nette. You write with distinct elegant style and gentle sensuality. Love this! 7. hugs
Parker Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 5:26 PM
I see, we both see the sea with eyes of wonder and awe..good luck this should do well it captures the essence of the sea's freedom
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Simply wonderful, Nette. I simply can't write this way even on one of my best days when it comes to free verse. Sure to make the list!!
Sergi Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Hi nette: A beautiful stirring poem of the sea, especially with the strains of "Aqua De Beber. Astrud Gilberto is one of my favorite jazz singers.
Arana Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 2:14 PM
You can take any topic and twist it into a wave lashing out a new tune. I am amazed with those paper boats and Jobim references to make this fluent poem a flowing lyric ' both gentle and wild! 7 + on my rating scale!
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