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Shopping Line

As I go through the store shopping, you go through the store a hopping. At check out~I have one thing, a full cart you bring. Cannot you read, only up to ten things you need. So you think you are very special, you are acting more like the devil. Date Written: 12/18/2021

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/22/2021 9:38:00 AM

Some people are there like that Paula. Enjoyed reading... Have a lovely blessed day dear.. Hugs... ~ Ani

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:34:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you enjoyed this one. You are so right, some people are there like that. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/21/2021 3:50:00 PM

Paula, They are consciously unconscious without thoughts or cares for others ! What is one to do ?! Sending all good wishes for a happy holiday ! Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:33:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this. I wonder of they were taught manners or not. Sometimes they will say, go a head. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Anselmo Boles

Date: 12/21/2021 3:17:00 PM

Right Paula! I see them often in Walmart and other stores; at times wearing goofy outfits and without a care. Happy Holidays to you and loved ones!...ab

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:31:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this one. It is all the stores. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2021 12:07:00 PM

oh yes, those people are annoying when one is in a hurry! I sometimes go a wee bit over the ten items limit. Hope people are not hating on me when I do that!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:30:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this fun but true write. I will never tell you go over your limit. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/21/2021 7:18:00 AM

Thoughtless people are everywhere. At Christmas, worse! I worked id department stores in Chicago and California.THANK God forAmazon, QVC and HSN. Plus other online services. Add,,,,with crime up. NO to shopping in stores. Add shortages and masks? I pass, Good one, Paula Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/22/2021 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this one. The on-line shopping has hurt the store. Shop from home can be fun. I see these rude people in the grocery store. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/21/2021 4:05:00 AM

It always surprises me when folks do that and not just at holiday time too!! Merry Christmas Paula!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/21/2021 7:17:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this write. Yes, rude people are still rude people all year long. Oh Well, that is life. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/20/2021 3:56:00 PM

Hello there, Paula. Pre-Christmas can be an unpleasant and stressful time of year, with families rushing around and fretting about everything.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/21/2021 7:15:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like my shopping write. Christmas is a busy time of the year. Rude people are still rude people all year long. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/19/2021 6:42:00 PM

Aw, just this once. Ha, ha -- That's what they all say. ~ Policies and Procedures Cop

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/20/2021 8:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Gad you like this fun/true write. Rude people with a cart full in a line for only 10 or less. It makes me want to scream. Cop where??? Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/19/2021 4:45:00 PM

Hello Paula goldsmith, Oh I have seen this happen in the grocery stores several times. I and I am in the line for 10itema or less. Inside I am screaming while truong hate to not yell at the person in front of me. Merry Christmas.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/20/2021 11:39:00 AM

Hello Paula, we are both screaming on the inside. People can be rude. Merry Christmas. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/20/2021 8:15:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Gad you like this true write. I find this all the year long. Rude people with a cart full. Yes, I am screaming inside. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/19/2021 2:19:00 PM

This was fun. I enjoyed the rhyme. Merry Christmas

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/20/2021 8:12:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Gad you enjoyed this fun rhyme write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Bill Baker

Date: 12/19/2021 11:07:00 AM

See this a lot during this crazy shopping season, Paula Nice rhyme poem to state your observation. A poet friend, Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2021 11:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Gad you like this fun yet true write. I find this to be true all the year long. Today, we have more rude people. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 12/19/2021 3:33:00 AM

Ho Ho Ho! It's getting festively chaotic out there alright. No such thing as an orderly queue, every man for himself....Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2021 11:25:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Gad you like this write. Yes, every man for himself this time of the year. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Deb M

Date: 12/18/2021 6:12:00 PM

Hi Paula I enjoyed this….pre Christmas can be somewhat rude and grumpy out there with people rushing and stressing Ha! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/19/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Gad you like my Shopping Line write. Pre-Christmas they are extra rude/grumpy. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................