Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Shopping Line

As I go through the store shopping,                                    you go through the store a hopping.                                    At check out~I have one thing,                                          a full cart you bring.                                                          Cannot you read,                                                              only up to ten things you need.                                                          So you think you are very special,                                      you are acting more like the devil.


Date Written: 12/18/2021

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Anitha Jayasankar December 22, 2021 at 9:38 AM Some people are there like that Paula. Enjoyed reading... Have a lovely blessed day dear.. Hugs... ~ Ani Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 10:34 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you enjoyed this one. You are so right, some people are there like that. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Susan Lawrence December 21, 2021 at 3:50 PM Paula, They are consciously unconscious without thoughts or cares for others ! What is one to do ?! Sending all good wishes for a happy holiday ! Susan :) Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 10:33 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this. I wonder of they were taught manners or not. Sometimes they will say, go a head. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Anselmo Boles December 21, 2021 at 3:17 PM Right Paula! I see them often in Walmart and other stores; at times wearing goofy outfits and without a care. Happy Holidays to you and loved ones!...ab Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 10:31 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this one. It is all the stores. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Andrea Dietrich December 21, 2021 at 12:07 PM oh yes, those people are annoying when one is in a hurry! I sometimes go a wee bit over the ten items limit. Hope people are not hating on me when I do that!! Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 10:30 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this fun but true write. I will never tell you go over your limit. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Panagiota Romios December 21, 2021 at 7:18 AM Thoughtless people are everywhere. At Christmas, worse! I worked id department stores in Chicago and California.THANK God forAmazon, QVC and HSN. Plus other online services. Add,,,,with crime up. NO to shopping in stores. Add shortages and masks? I pass, Good one, Paula Panagiota Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 10:28 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this one. The on-line shopping has hurt the store. Shop from home can be fun. I see these rude people in the grocery store. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Mike Gentile December 21, 2021 at 4:05 AM It always surprises me when folks do that and not just at holiday time too!! Merry Christmas Paula!!! Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2021 at 7:17 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like this write. Yes, rude people are still rude people all year long. Oh Well, that is life. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Sotto Poet December 20, 2021 at 3:56 PM Hello there, Paula. Pre-Christmas can be an unpleasant and stressful time of year, with families rushing around and fretting about everything. Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2021 at 7:15 AM Thanks for reading/writing. Gad you like my shopping write. Christmas is a busy time of the year. Rude people are still rude people all year long. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Gershon Wolf December 19, 2021 at 6:42 PM Aw, just this once. Ha, ha -- That's what they all say. ~ Policies and Procedures Cop Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2021 at 8:17 AM Thanks for your note. Gad you like this fun/true write. Rude people with a cart full in a line for only 10 or less. It makes me want to scream. Cop where??? Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Darlene De Beaulieu December 19, 2021 at 4:45 PM Hello Paula goldsmith, Oh I have seen this happen in the grocery stores several times. I and I am in the line for 10itema or less. Inside I am screaming while truong hate to not yell at the person in front of me. Merry Christmas. Darlene De Beaulieu December 20, 2021 at 11:39 AM Hello Paula, we are both screaming on the inside. People can be rude. Merry Christmas. Hugs. Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2021 at 8:15 AM Thanks for your note. Gad you like this true write. I find this all the year long. Rude people with a cart full. Yes, I am screaming inside. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Debra L Brown December 19, 2021 at 2:19 PM This was fun. I enjoyed the rhyme. Merry Christmas Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2021 at 8:12 AM Thanks for your note. Gad you enjoyed this fun rhyme write. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Bill Baker December 19, 2021 at 11:07 AM See this a lot during this crazy shopping season, Paula Nice rhyme poem to state your observation. A poet friend, Bill Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2021 at 11:28 AM Thanks for your note. Gad you like this fun yet true write. I find this to be true all the year long. Today, we have more rude people. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Delice Arleen Skelly December 19, 2021 at 3:33 AM Ho Ho Ho! It's getting festively chaotic out there alright. No such thing as an orderly queue, every man for himself....Delice Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2021 at 11:25 AM Thanks for your note. Gad you like this write. Yes, every man for himself this time of the year. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................

Deb M December 18, 2021 at 6:12 PM Hi Paula I enjoyed this….pre Christmas can be somewhat rude and grumpy out there with people rushing and stressing Ha! Debx Paula Goldsmith December 19, 2021 at 11:23 AM Thanks for your note. Gad you like my Shopping Line write. Pre-Christmas they are extra rude/grumpy. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................