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Shootout On Main Street

A shootout on Main Street at high noon, Buck Bring your rusty six-shooter -- lots of luck! You’ll need it, you see, When up against me Nobody survives calling me a schmuck!
FIRST PLACE WINNER Written May 4, 2022 for "High Noon" Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May 10-10-5-5-10 syllables

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Date: 5/9/2022 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Milt. Blessings my friend
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 12:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lasaad. I enjoyed writing this little humorous limerick for the contest.
Date: 5/9/2022 10:14:00 AM
Hi Milt, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a nice day:-)Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 12:11:00 PM
Alexis, thank you, for the well-wishes! You, too. Have a wonderful week.
Date: 5/9/2022 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Milton. Blessings my friend
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 9:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve. It was a fun write. Hope you have a marvelous week, Eve.
Date: 5/8/2022 9:57:00 PM
Fun with an advice. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/9/2022 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Chris. I enjoyed it.
Date: 5/8/2022 8:47:00 AM
Good one, Milton! HaHa! Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/8/2022 9:51:00 AM
Thanks, Ann. So happy you got a good laugh out of this one!
Date: 5/8/2022 6:11:00 AM
Lol, His luck just ran out,Very nicely done Milton, Congrats on your win
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/8/2022 8:27:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph. You noticed he was advised to bring his "rusty" six shooter, as opposed to his "trusty" six shooter. I thought that was a nice touch! Again, it was a pleasure writing for your contest. I really enjoyed it.
Date: 5/8/2022 5:33:00 AM
Lol :-D Very witty limerick Milton. I enjoyed reading this. Well done and congratulations on your first place win. Cheers Anne :-)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/8/2022 8:28:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne. It was a fun write.
Date: 5/5/2022 7:26:00 AM
That’s very cute Milton….I like it! Debx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/5/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much, Deb, for your sweet compliment.
Date: 5/5/2022 1:41:00 AM
Great limerick cadence Hank. Good luck in the contest!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/5/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I see where you placed in the Tall Tales contest. Good one! Congratulations!
Date: 5/4/2022 4:07:00 PM
Right between the eyes. Kapow! Fun one. Yee haw!...ab
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/4/2022 6:52:00 PM
I wonder how many dudes came to their end like that in those days?
Date: 5/4/2022 11:48:00 AM
Got to teach these tenderfoot's some respect lol. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/4/2022 1:02:00 PM
Right on, Tom! Don't take no sass from anyone!!!

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