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Shooing Carmens Suiters Away

Carmen has never tried to be pretty Her six brothers warned her to stay plain. But as she grew, she could not help herself. Now they are scaring suiters away on a regular basis. I got Jose, you get Pedro. Done! I shooed Thomas, you shoo Jesus. You are asking me to shoo Jesus?

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Date: 11/9/2022 11:47:00 AM
Caren, a delightful poem
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2022 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Constance
Date: 11/9/2022 9:45:00 AM
Okay, as long as you pronounce it "Hay-sus!" (chuckling)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/9/2022 8:12:00 PM
I knew you would like this one