Shogun Collab Bill's Side 9 Richard Pickett Series

When the bus first got there, the Medic was tending to Brick and it took 
all of five minutes for that to turn around. Brick was tending to the nurse.  
No surprise, Bill thought to himself grinning. Girl never had a chance, and he laughed 
while walking back to Brick’s squad car. The blue lights were still bubbling over the 
top of the rig. Bill got in, called Brick’s twenty third to tell them to pick up his car at 
the bridge but Brick had already anticipated that and beat him to it. It came as no 
surprise to Bill. His detective buddy would never let pleasure interfere with his 
passion for police work and figured bill would do that.
     Bill drove the car back to the Bywater bridge where Bill’s own squad car was 
parked still reflecting swirling lights off the base of the bridge. The bus had picked 
up the body and was gone. Bill was still snooping around the crime scene twenty 
minutes later when another squad car dropped off a driver to pick up Brick’s car. Bill 
knew him as a player for the 21st precinct horseshoe team. “Hey John..”  “Hello 
Cowboy, good to see you back. You got a messy one goin’ here, I’m told.” 
“Yep, I reckon we do. It’s Brick’s case but I got a feeling I’ll be in on it before long if I 
don’t get fired first.” 
“Looks like you're already on it if you ask me...  Well I gotta run. Catch you on a 
make up game.” 
   All Bill found under the bridge, beside the usual out the car window trash, which 
could be construed to be evidence was a lady’s black high heeled shoe and a 
compact case containing blush and red lipstick. He threw them in an evidence bag to 
give to Brick later.
The speaker in his car was broadcasting “ one Victor seven, come in? One Victor 
seven come in?” ---“Yeah one Victor seven here. What is it Tom?”
“Uh, Lt Griggs wants to know what’s goin’ on. Seems a little upset. There’s talk you 
been joyriding in another precinct. Funny thing; he didn’t  know you were even 
signed in or back on duty. A minor detail.  I took care of it for you.”  “Thanks Tom, I 
owe you one.”
“He wants a written report on his desk of today’s goings on by knock off or there 
won’t be a knock off for ya. I stuck up for ya and told him I didn’t think you could 
write but he just gave me a dirty look. Anyway, you’ve been told.” “Okay, thanks 
Tom…... I think.” One Victor seven out. Bill headed back to the Thirty first to finish up 
the dreaded paper work  but first he’d call Brick to get their stories straight. (to be 
cont. on Richard Pickett soup site.)

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Date: 12/29/2010 1:11:00 PM
Hi Bob, Christmas was not too pleasant..hit with a virus which took away a lot of expected fun. And I missed a lot of time on Soup. Anyway, I'm grateful that I'm feeling much better! Still enjoying the story. Hope your Christmas was joyful! My best wishes for the coming New Year! Blessings, peace,joy and happiness always! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:02:00 PM
You two work well together, telling the story of these two characters, well done to both of you~~
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Date: 12/25/2010 5:32:00 PM
To bad Brick and Bill will be taking a hiatus after the next 3. Well done Cowboy......Me next...God Bless Taz....
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:19:00 PM
Police offers always have each other's backs, Rob. Now who is the high-heeled lady -- perhaps the samurai? Guess we'll have to wait for the next installment. Sly Fox is a guy I know, not a politician. LOL But he was a fox/wolf in sheep's clothing. Merry Christmas, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:18:00 PM
Interesting once again, I'm enjoying the talent here.. The collaborations between you two gentlemen is fascinating. Enjoying the events here,, glad I decided to stop by before i head out,. and enjoy my x- mass,,,have a merry x-mass,..p.d.
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