Shoe Bop - Kerplop

Cinderella was a starry-eyed lass
Dancing at the ball in shoes made of glass
While bolting for the doors
She encountered waxed floors
And unfortunately fell on her A$$!



For: SKAT*
SHOES contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Aul Avatar
March 22, 2011 at 11:03 AM
I really liked this one.........George
Keogh Jr. Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 6:54 PM
The last line gets the door prize and the mark. This is a winner in my book! Regards, Gerard.
Inka Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 10:20 PM
Hahaha. Very clever. So that's how she lost the shoe
Watie Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Funny!
La France Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 1:45 PM
This is so cute and witty, I am sure SKAT will love it~~
Heck Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Pretty good...hey, I gotta a visually-induced chuckle out of it. Best wishes for the contest. Peace always, John
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 12:27 PM
Got a great laugh from your limerick, Kory. Clever and witty! Love, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 12:30 PM
hehe, thanks for the laughs Kory ;-)
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 11:30 AM
Since the contest has been judged, I will have to look and see how won..This one was a good one to be in the winning circle..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Poet Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Ahhha---very funny----enjoyed--kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 11:46 PM
hahaha, Cute one!!!
Mehta Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 2:47 PM
Very nice theme with a nice entry to the contest, Kory
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 1:20 PM
This was terrific and enjoyable.Thanks for your congrats on my win.~Teresa~
Richards Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Ooops, hope she has a good chiropracter!!! Good one, Kory!!
Onclaud Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 10:56 AM
freakingly clever and hilarious. kory! winning bet in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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