Shodden Down-Trodden

My shoes lie prone like dogs waiting for a new adventure
Will it be a soft seashore shuffle?
A jaunt through the mall, all dusty with grime
A plunge to tippy-toe into mud and puddles
A climb up a tree or hike up mountain slopes
A skip through playgrounds with the kids
A ride up an escalator, what a relief!
All polished and shined, a first date in mind
A twirl around dance floor, avoiding soft toes
Laced up tightly and properly for business date, late
Or pounding the pavement for shopping walk jaunt
A stroll through the park on soft green grass, fresh mown.
Finally to relax off-feet, in lounge room, at last we're home,
Before shoes shed, get bedded in closet with friends,
Who share tales and tongue wags with the shodden down-trodden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sladojevic Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 3:13 AM
Intriguing topic! I very much liked the metaphorical image applied to your shoes.
Anderson Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Thanks for your comment. Very much appreciated. Cheers
Harris Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 4:15 PM
How exciting to be your shoes! Those tongues must wag constantly in your closet! Nice poem.
Williams Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Nice hyperbole.
Anderson Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Thanks for the comment
Sergi Avatar
August 16, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Hi John: A great poetic theme ,Your shoes are a small biography. Great Write!
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