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Shocking

his gulosity grew at such velocity – an atrocity

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Jennifer Proxenos

January 28, 2021 at 10:48 AM

A wonderful Monoku - i love your triple words rhyming and making such a lot of sense. The enormity and chaos grew and intensified - what an atrocity. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler

January 28, 2021 at 3:32 PM

Hi Jennifer! Thanks for the visit and comments :) Linda

Andrea Dietrich

January 28, 2021 at 9:06 AM

great triple rhyming!

Linda Alice Fowler

January 28, 2021 at 3:31 PM

Thanks for the nice words Andrea. :) Linda

Robert Pettit

January 28, 2021 at 6:48 AM

You probably had most people go to their dictionaries with the second word in your writing.

Linda Alice Fowler

January 28, 2021 at 6:51 AM

I try to throw a little something new or different in my poems - just to get people to think. It's not all on the surface. :)

Gershon Wolf

January 26, 2021 at 8:03 PM

Wow! 'Gulocity' -- what a word! And what a rhyme. And what a monoku! Is there a contest for this. Too bad if not. It's a big winner. Bullseye of a monoku, Linda! Cheers, Gershon

Linda Alice Fowler

January 27, 2021 at 6:35 AM

Oh my Gershon - thanks for the glowing review! No contest. Thanks again for the visit and for the supportive words gw. laf