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Shock Treatment

As one freshly released from Bedlam
He asked her, intending no harm
"Can I kiss you madam"?
As if he were her Adam
Her fist fell on his cheek ‘dum’ ‘dum’!

Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2021

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December 5, 2022 at 1:05 PM

Well, at least he asked. Some who are supposed to be sane would just kiss or more without asking or caring. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

November 27, 2021 at 7:34 PM

Hello Valsa ... seems like he was too close and forgot to duck. Oh well, a lesson learnt - thank you Valsa - Lindsay

November 28, 2021 at 12:09 AM

Yes, he couldn't duck ! With a swollen face, he must have withdrawn in shame ! Thank you Lindsay !

Andrea Dietrich

November 26, 2021 at 7:48 PM

Bam!! Good ending!!

November 26, 2021 at 10:58 PM

Thank you Andrea ....!

November 26, 2021 at 10:40 AM

She should wear a face mask imprinted, "Here's mine; where's yours?" . . . .

November 26, 2021 at 10:57 PM

Oh I liked that.... Lol.... You have made it even more humorous ! Thank you !

November 26, 2021 at 6:12 AM

Fun read, Valsa. He needs to return to where he was.

November 26, 2021 at 7:35 AM

Quite true... Vijay ! Your response has brought a smile to my face...! Thanks a lot !

November 26, 2021 at 1:33 AM

Lol, that'll teach him. Tom

November 26, 2021 at 5:22 AM

Yes, he deserves it ! Never will he dare for such an outrage. Thank you Tom

Victor Buhagiar

November 26, 2021 at 1:16 AM

Very original. Good for a laugh.

November 26, 2021 at 5:23 AM

Glad you had a good laugh ! So my purpose is served , dear friend . Thanks !

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