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As one freshly released from Bedlam He asked her, intending no harm "Can I kiss you madam"? As if he were her Adam Her fist fell on his cheek ‘dum’ ‘dum’!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/5/2022 1:05:00 PM
Well, at least he asked. Some who are supposed to be sane would just kiss or more without asking or caring. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/27/2021 7:34:00 PM
Hello Valsa ... seems like he was too close and forgot to duck. Oh well, a lesson learnt - thank you Valsa - Lindsay
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Valsa George
Date: 11/28/2021 12:09:00 AM
Yes, he couldn't duck ! With a swollen face, he must have withdrawn in shame ! Thank you Lindsay !
Date: 11/26/2021 7:48:00 PM
Bam!! Good ending!!
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Valsa George
Date: 11/26/2021 10:58:00 PM
Thank you Andrea ....!
Date: 11/26/2021 10:40:00 AM
She should wear a face mask imprinted, "Here's mine; where's yours?" . . . .
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Valsa George
Date: 11/26/2021 10:57:00 PM
Oh I liked that.... Lol.... You have made it even more humorous ! Thank you !
Date: 11/26/2021 6:12:00 AM
Fun read, Valsa. He needs to return to where he was.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/26/2021 7:35:00 AM
Quite true... Vijay ! Your response has brought a smile to my face...! Thanks a lot !
Date: 11/26/2021 1:33:00 AM
Lol, that'll teach him. Tom
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Valsa George
Date: 11/26/2021 5:22:00 AM
Yes, he deserves it ! Never will he dare for such an outrage. Thank you Tom
Date: 11/26/2021 1:16:00 AM
Very original. Good for a laugh.
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Valsa George
Date: 11/26/2021 5:23:00 AM
Glad you had a good laugh ! So my purpose is served , dear friend . Thanks !

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