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Shipwreck

Shipwreck Forceful truths captive to glistening diamond watered ice descends upon her mothers blacked inky oceans sea's couch, uncomplaining peaceful sleep at last.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 7/20/2017 7:35:00 AM

Good day Jackie. You said a lot with few words...I like that. So many unspoken truths Thanks for sharing

Jackie Elston
Date: 7/20/2017 7:50:00 AM

Thank you for kind comment. Loss is hard to put into words as it can be different for everyone, but l think everyone feels a sense of 'should have' guilt, till passage of time gives release from that guilt, which brings us peace, at last.

Silent One

Date: 7/20/2017 6:26:00 AM

Deep write Jackie, well written..

Jackie Elston
Date: 7/20/2017 7:35:00 AM

Thank you for kind comment. lm not sure where my inspiration came from for this poem, as at time of writing l was thinking of a completely different theme, but for some reason, this this one came..very strange.