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Shining Forever True

Lady you make the fire burn warm inside beauty
arising sun setting deep radiant reflections glimmer

Mirror of happiness who sings most beautiful in daylight
tonight a million stars may shine upon waves silver dance

Taking a spirit inside the truest heartbeat sparkling diamond luster
only one who holds forever treasuring each passing moon howls 

You came to me each waking new day immortal winks
beating soft tender drum rolls echo deeply love a faraway paradise

Soulful emotions shines golden within emotions pearl drops
unchaining a dream the waterfalls flowing to the ocean sing

Silken soft ribbons tie feelings inside bound one knot touching
always the flickering candle lights shadows dance with truth

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/14/2015 11:56:00 AM

So nice to read your poetry this morning. Light & Love

Alesia Leach

Date: 3/10/2015 4:47:00 PM

You write beautifully. I love the words you have chosen for this poem - I had to read it several times. It is an elegant poem. ;0)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/11/2015 12:05:00 AM

ah alesia your so sweet thank you kindly for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/10/2015 7:29:00 AM

A poet's soft step into heaven!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/10/2015 11:56:00 PM

heaven holding a beautiful dream deeply connie always sings to the heart wonderful comment bless you dear friend

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2015 6:03:00 PM

I guess this is the gentler side of bondage. All kidding aside this is a lovely romantic piece.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/10/2015 10:40:00 AM

smiling richard when someone holds your heart deeply one feels forever bound wonderful comment dear pal heartfelt bless you

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/8/2015 11:14:00 PM

Simply beautiful liam A7

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/10/2015 10:30:00 AM

ah thank you arthur i wrote this from deep unwavering feelings pal

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:45:00 AM

Hello Liam, a lovely way of sharing a true shining love. Amazing and dreamy... Love LINDA

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/8/2015 1:17:00 PM

thank you ever so kindly linda for the heartfelt beautiful comment wishing you a blessed beautiful day

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/8/2015 5:57:00 AM

Excellent. Very romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/8/2015 11:51:00 AM

thank you ravi dear pal wonderful comment wishing you a blessed beautiful day

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 3/7/2015 1:19:00 AM

laden with love:)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/8/2015 11:45:00 AM

vandana thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/5/2015 10:02:00 AM

:) Liam...a soul as romantic as yours...and faithful and true...deserves the best in life. Lovely. Hugs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/5/2015 11:24:00 AM

ah eileen your so sweet life will always deal the cards of truth in the end i believe wonderful comment pal heartfelt appreciated wishing you a great weekend

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/5/2015 9:42:00 AM

Hi Liam! Wow! Another so very beautiful and romantic love poem you've penned here my dearest friend.Just dazzling!So dreamy!Another diamond from your pen!A very huge 7 +++++to you!A fav!For sure a superb romantic, sweet and a very precious passionate love poem to be held so very close to ones heart. smiling.I enjoyed it!Your imagery In this piece is awesome!Perfectly beautiful so full of love and passion!Shining forever so true.Your pen is truly mighty golden!To me you're always the best Liam! So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet!I wish you the best!Have a very lovely day!In His light! God bless you always!:) Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 3/5/2015 11:18:00 AM

thank you kindly dorian for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you