Shining

Today I met a man without a name.
When I looked at him he looked my way.
I was curious as to who this man really was, 
so I tried to group my words in my mind, 
but I couldn’t find the ones 
that form my thoughts.
So I stood there,
and he stood there,
silently staring in complete
wonder and amazement. 

The moon was shining through 
a window behind him and I wanted to say 
What a beautiful moon we have tonight. But it 
seemed to soon to ruin the silence with 
unnecessary sound. 
So, I stood there, 
silently staring into his eyes, 
which were a deep, dark brown. 
We seemed to have an entire conversation 
without ever opening our mouths.

He said he’s gone through half his life
and not a single moment has passed by
that he’s a bit proud of. And I said I,
I can change that. I can give you a life 
that you can take home to your parents, 
that you can brag about in your locker 
room rants to your, so-called friends,
to your quasi tolerable co-workers 
who can’t stop bragging about the
promotion that they got and 
you thought you had in the bag. 

He listened,
though he saw a future that I didn’t. 
I couldn’t see that it was just a 
fantasy that I couldn’t get out of my head. 
Soon, he made me see. 
He made me see the closed doors and the
broken floor boards of this 
not so squeaky clean dream.

Today I conversed with man, he had no name. 
And without ever once opening his mouth,
he told me about the nothings that cloud
his entire life so far. 
I looked at him and he looked my way. 
I couldn’t help but figure out that his
life mirrored mine.
A life like a cloudy April day. 

Staring into the doorway of our future 
selves, we couldn’t speak. 
And when I say we, I really mean me. 
Because I’m
silently staring into a combination of 
silver and glass made to reflect 
the innermost self. 
But who am I? 
Who is the man that stares back at me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Awesome introspective write, Andrew!! Congratulations on this poem being featured on the Soup this week! Peace, Audrey
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January 20, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Andrew - an amazing piece and so well deserving its feature this week. Many rgds Janette
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January 19, 2010 at 4:40 PM
i love this.
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January 19, 2010 at 4:18 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
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January 19, 2010 at 2:12 AM
Hi Andrew. Congatulations on your feature of the week. Very introspective poem. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Lainie
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January 18, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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January 18, 2010 at 3:34 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrew. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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