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Shine On

“Let your light so shine before men, that they may see your good works, and glorify your Father which is in heaven.”  Matthew 5:16 of the King James Bible

Shimmering with wondrous truth’s radiance
Honest trust beams against obscure deceit 
Illumined to smite lurking falsity…
Nestling inside God’s gleaming assurance
Enlightened for freedom bliss’ sharing treat
Optimizing vibrant faith verity…
Now, my soul glows with blest redemption praise. 

Sizzling midst ennui of boredom’s variance
Hope sparkles though attacking doubts do greet
Inspiring service with prayer beauty…
Nourished by gracious kindness-endurance
Exposing worship in fellowship sweet
Offering forgiveness from love’s bounty…
Now, my heart shines toward gratitude blaze.

Modified Hybronnet of 14 lines with rhyme scheme abc-abc-d; abc-abc-d, amidst Acrostic form.

April 15, 2021
3rd place, "Writing Prompt - Shine" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 4/21/2021.
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April 22, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with this wonderful Modified Hybronnet poem, well done, I like your chosen bible quote too, your faith is always shining bright, love _Constance
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April 15, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Wow! This is absolutely brilliant!
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